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Old 06-04-05, 11:26 PM   #14
TeamOne
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From: Chitown
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This stupid college kid. You're shit, like feces
9th degree? More like ninth try at your degree
not feelin this at all..... really not final 4 worthy..... 4/10
Your face is so ugly, even you kno that it's tru
I'd try to cover your face.......................
.....................................but it's already done by you!
ehhh, this was ok..... but fake personal-ish.... 5/10
°This °kid °sucks... -°and °he °is °wacker °than °me
Wanna kno who'll win? Jus look near the 9th degree
i thought this line was really hot..... best line so far.. 7/10
All you are you owe to your parents, but you don't count
Cuz you jus give them a penny............................
....................................and you more than square the account!!
ehhhhhhhhhh not feelin this..... its good ur setup and punch were related, but not really feelin the punch.... 4/10
You ain't gon win here, man, my rhymes are jus too mean
You're gonna go and end up short, and I ain't talkin' about your jeans
i thought this was another nice line...... u needa improve ur consistency, u have a real hot line e very few bars.... 7/10
You got here wit no-shows, and by battlin' wack fucks
You could prolly get enough exercise, by jus pushin' your luck
callin a VC member a wack fuck?!?! NO, not good!! lmao, but this was still ur best bar prolly 8/10
Your charade, we see through it, kinda like it was a mist
Your wins are 9th degree burns.................................
.................................................. ...... man... they don't exist
lol, kinda made me laugh, but not real special..... especially cuz hes like 30-5 or sumthin like that..... but the concept was real nice 7/10
Take you to tha "House of pain" was "jumpin around" in pic
only way you'll "ever-last" "hard", is some viagra, you "dick!"
WWWWWWWAAAAAACCCCCCCKKKKKKKK u woulda done better just takin this out of ur verse.. 3/10
My flow, you kno, it go and make hoes, no-show
Am I gettin' dope wit you? Oh, yea... how would you kno?
naw...... its alrite, but its a weak way of callin him "not dope".. 6/10
Your humongous post count... only time that you look big
Wanna kno where your tourney ends?................
.................................................. .. Man, jus click my sig
this was an ok closer.... the setup took away from it, but i thought it was still hardhittin..... 7/10

58/100

9th Degree

Spul you've been duckin' me for months, I tried stayin' on your heels
But you're more shook than driving instructors with Asians at the wheel
this was ok....... for some reason tho, i didnt like it all that much..... its prolly cuz the wording of the line alone is played... 5/10
You got no appeal, so I'll only son you for a moment like I'm your foster
We're in Ghost Writerz together, how come yours aren't on the roster?
lmao....... that was a real hot punch..... set up was eh..... 7/10
They'll get you banned again, and you'll deny it, fess up and spill guts
Oh well, you're the RV vampire - if you bit you'd still suck
lol..... nice, i remember actually thinkin about how the stuff he "bit" wasnt even that good also, but vampire=suck is kinda played..... 6/10
And crying to strobe is actually startin' to go out of fashion
…This guy's a gangster? His real name's Sebastian!
lol...... this was hillarious... but i unno wat to think.... we all know its 8mile..... but i unno, it made me laugh alot.. 5/10
But you've got plenty of dirt on me, and worst of all
The fact I've voted for you before…now thank AIM for that personal
this was aight...... i could imagine it bein alot better if u worded it differently.... 5.5/10
It's always either "plz vote!" or "I'll bang this chick till her tummy hurts"
Well of course you would, you might as well get your money's worth
lol..... kinda nice......6/10
'Cuz if you were broke as ya rhymes she wouldn't let you touch her
You're wacker than a vote based on structure, motherfucker!
this was like his wack punch....... just not as wack.... 4/10
But on this site you're accomplished, that's supposed to stress me up
Yet I see your body of work…has developed anorexia
lol...... i thought this was nice, but not great. 7/10
And if you're always biting and cheatin' then what you still flow for?
You got band from RV more than Livestrong in '04
this was decent......6/10
And now I'm curious why I'm still kickin' this rhyme
'Cuz you ain't even worth my time to finish this…
nice concept....... lmao, reminds of that nsync song.... "gone" or w/e... 6.5/10

58/100

ok........ this is not even funny...... ima put a tie i guesss..... i couldnt really see myself givin it to either of yall....... but someone tell me if i Have to choose
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