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Old 11-23-05, 11:59 PM   #2
Mentalz
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This drop is dope as hell fams. Great finish on the piece. Vivid emotion throughout, no doubt about that my man. Excellant imagery and choice of words. A few lines the struck me the hardest:

Cuz we don’t have no white people in the slum
No black people neither
Only poor people with no green

^Nice job getting that view across.

Because the world I live in is all about money
People fight for it
People kill for it
People die for it
Until everyone lives for it

^Nice as shit.

Keep it up.

Peace.
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