Originally Posted by will appear

ok non fixion

Flow:7 was off in a few parts but was for the most part on props for this
Delivery: 7 you sound like ur running out of breath in places sounds like ur moving away from the mic in parts
Creativity:6.5 i dont think these topics really allow you to be creative really but u did decent
Lyrics:6.5 nothing that i havent heard really would have liked to hear u do ur own hook
Beat:7 never really liked this beat to be honest

Total:34
overall you are most definately elivating flow is improving very little flaws lyrics could have thrown in some tight metaphores but you can only be creative to an extent with these topics so you did waht you could overall pretty good job props


E.C
Flow: 7 pretty good i heard a few parts where it went off beat but overall ur flow was pretty illy lol
Delivery:5.5 delivery didnt switch up at all did you have a hook?
Creativity:5.5 ive heard most of this stuff b4 u did what u could with the topic
Lyrics:6.5 ive ehardd most of it b4 the little that i heard
Beat: 7 pretty cool liked it more than fixion's

Total:31.5 you naturally have a disadvantage so you need to wrok harder than everyone else flow was really good for the most part delivery and lyrics were ur weak point in my opinion id like u to drop lyrics next time and switch up ur delivery

so my vote goes to fixion