ehhhh it was ight had some played out but ight metaphors in here...structure was good...flow was decent i could read without havin ta go back a sentence...ur rhyme scheme was a lil played out but overall it was decent better than some catz i seen on here..and even though u had an attempt ta make it original it had an old old old topic every person almost talks bout on this site....gunz, gatz, heaters, etc....that shit is so played out mayn....be more original...truth is u probably never even touched a gun in ur life so please dont bring that shit to the net it'll just make u look like an e-thug....maybe u do have that shit but please find sumthin else ta rap bout...gunz are so boring ta hear bout nowadayz..but overall it was a decent o.m....keep it up and keep elevating....7.5/10