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02-07-04, 12:35 AM | #16 | |||
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it was actually probably me.
this piece was really good. the flow was near-flawless, there was good use of internal rhyming and multies and the like. You writer's voice was weak. You vocab was nice. Your imagery was dope. question: What was the point of the entire thing? what were you trying to say?
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02-07-04, 04:44 PM | #17 | |||
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*thread cleaned*
stop freeposting you fucking cunts.
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02-07-04, 05:34 PM | #18 | ||||
Eddy.
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Maven!..stop deleting my posts...
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02-12-04, 01:22 PM | #19 | ||||||
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02-13-04, 01:59 PM | #20 | ||||
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Hello~~~~the result???
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02-13-04, 08:04 PM | #21 | |||
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go read the thread and answer my question first.
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02-13-04, 10:33 PM | #22 | |||||
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^Good question...I recently started the "Left Behind" series,I found it very intersting and I wondered to my self what if this really happened??? Is this really possible?? and I even went back and read the book of "Revealations", and once again I was left wondering in the "wonderworld?",than one night I was having diffculties sleeping and I started to write my own version of what would it be like if the earth came to it's end?...I don't know how many writers on this site have read the "Left Behind" series,and I'm not a christian and I wanted to see and tell it from my point of view without involing so much religion involed in it...It started as a one page essay? and it just got a bit longer and longer...and to sum everything up...I wanted to show the users at RB...What if this happened???..Is this possible??? and the ultimate question...What would you do?????? |
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02-14-04, 01:17 AM | #23 | |||
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good...sorry, I was just seeing if your piece meant anything or if you were just writing =)
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