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12-18-05, 10:27 PM | #16 | |||||
A Reflection Of The Past
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this was okay for an alright piece, this was a quite old read to be upped so no clue why this happened anyways...blaw decent read iguess...elevate on imagery however its much needed
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12-18-05, 10:33 PM | #17 | ||||
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.. I Don't Believe It Need To Be Stated Yet : I Haven't Been On In A Good While That Is Where The 'Up' Came From Obviously ...
But Thanks For The Feedback...
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12-19-05, 06:27 AM | #18 | |||
Skadoosh!
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this was cool, decent vocabs and shit and overall quality delivery, but the imagery was average at best, it needs to be upped to a higher level to make the quality of the piece that much better.
and... welcome back, i ain't seen you on in a long ass time, not since i made that freeposting thread we had |
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12-19-05, 09:09 AM | #19 | |||||
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And I Have Not The Slightest Idea Of Whom You Are... Thanks For The Feedback Though Was Appricaited
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12-19-05, 09:34 AM | #20 | |||
Poet's Daughter.
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O_o....Back huh?.....
*Plays mace welcome back*.......
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12-19-05, 09:55 AM | #21 | |||||||
Middle Weight
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wow....damn i had to read dis 3 timez....lol......vocab n structure were both off da chain....da flow was hella good......damn ma.....nice job of reppin da femcees....plz leave some feed on my piece "Who Am I"....1
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12-19-05, 12:59 PM | #22 | |||||
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Thank........................................You
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12-19-05, 01:00 PM | #23 | |||||
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Thanks 'C' For The FeedBack ... Most Appriciated -No Doubt-
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