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kk was feelin the flow a little, but u need some mutlies. and need to step up on the story factor. cus u were bouncing every where. i liked the part where u said
"Whats good homie, whats the deal I'll put the gun to your face,hows it feel" that was good. besides that keep it up. S to the Z. ps. b more realistic. |
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