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02-10-04, 10:15 AM | #16 | |||
Mona Lisa.
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IP: 9E53 07A2
Props to both for the battle both took totally different views.
Sarcasm-your main detail here was 'Detail. your imagery was the nice thang about it & i enjoyed how your flow matched your sense of Detail. the story was pretty vague but I felt like this was more thoughts than storyline Key-Nice story. I felt myself gettin into it a lot but that odd moment findin myself dropping off, but it was a lil diffent from the sad stories I have read even tho I did fall off sumtimes you still gave a good edge and Jimmy was a well thought of character. Props to for digging that out. V/Sarcasm-I took Detail & Imagery over storyline in this one pz
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02-10-04, 05:46 PM | #17 | |||
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IP: D637 72D3
I'm not being the deciding vote.
I am giving this until I go to sleep tonight, then it will be closed, and be a tie. get voters.
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02-10-04, 08:08 PM | #18 | ||||
Over Weight
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IP: C1DA C961
poo head..i'm up 3 2..I thought..
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