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03-30-05, 04:25 PM
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The Ups and Downs of Life
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IP: 13A4 AD49
I just deleted 16-- EDIT: 17 free posts from this thread... if WickedClown posts here again for any reason ima just close the thread, this shit is ridiculous.
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03-31-05, 05:13 PM
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Loyalty proven
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IP: C7EE 5FCD
lol, yall read what seven third said, and scared to up this. im not. everyone ups they shit so... uppin
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03-31-05, 06:26 PM
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IP: 8B82 F191
1st guy....flow was off......ehh wasnt really feelin the lyrics
2nd- nice flow...i was feelin her...nothin outstanding...not bad though... 3rd....best of the 3 so far....best lyrics....and best flow... i was liking the chorus...it fit the beat well....nice shit.... 4th....good flow...pretty nice lyrics...good deliverance...was feelin it.... 5th...shq n free throws line...PLAYED OUT!!!....pretty good flow...other than that 1 line it was pretty good.... chorus again.... 6th...im feelin her...flow was pretty good and on point...no outstanding lines or nothin...but a pretty solid verse here.... 7th...ehh wasnt really feelin his flow...lyrics was kinda basic in my opinion.... 8th...decent flow...decent punches n shit....not too bad...decent verse here.... overall this was a decent track...nothin outstanding as far as a diss track goes...quality wasnt great...but i know you werent aiming for it to be or nothin...so its all good...there were a couple of them that stood out more than others....the 3rd guy...4th guy...the hook was nice...thats what i was feelin most in this collab here...but i enjoyed listening...this was completely honest feed....please RTF with feed on my track...Not On My Level
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03-31-05, 10:20 PM
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Hell yeah
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IP: BCC3 5D61
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03-31-05, 10:51 PM
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IP: B773 FB68
lmao... damn... Y'all was deep on this track
 haha... Hmmmm It was a good diss 2 me - lotta shit talkin and damn at the dads funerial line... shiiit...
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03-31-05, 10:54 PM
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I see dumb people
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IP: 2186 7BA4
ok listenin'...
intro was wack first verse was aiight, lady fiya good verse. nice stuff. Duke, good good... wtgF?!?! "You can say that you're SPuL, and I'm trip.. you're my bitch" whoa... fuck you dude. What the fuck. I ain't even listenin' no more. But fuck that dude Seriously it's on. I'ma record that track, shit goin' down. fuck you nigga. get a fuckin' new mic. pc one
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04-01-05, 01:48 AM
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Engineer / Club Promoter
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IP: 303B 3599
Listening through my COBy headphones.
Intro, hmm, I don't get it. Maybe some personal I dunno. 1st verse: WOW that was wack. Rhymescheme was bland. Felt liek I was getting shouted at the whole verse 2nd verse: Sounds like a Remy Martin clone. Not bad, but I'm not into that gun bussin shit. No body buys into it and just sems limited to me. 3rd: Gotta work on emotion, other wise it's a pretty good verse. 4th: N's presence is killer. Lyrics were alright. 5th: Liek the beat change up, if this dude had a better mic, this would be one of if not THE hottest verse in the track. Mostly presence and rhyme scheme though. Lyrics aren't that "wow" really. 6th: Voice is on. Lyrics were okay. Forgettable though. 7th: vocals could have been done different and a little more flat. It sounds like someone went heavy with the effects. 8th: Flow was lumpy as hell. More personals in this verse than 3-4 of the other verses combined. 9th: Personals are on. Here comes that wack-ass gun shit again which brings on more generics. Eh, stopped listening after this iron in the club bullshit. Waiting for the next verse. All in all, man, for 10 people, honestly, I was disapointed. Aside from the bad blending of the beats, but for 10 people ,this shit should DEF been a LOOOOOTTTTTTT harder than this. This whole track was like 80% generics. Only 2-3 people really spit constant personals. The rest shouldn't have made the cut in my honest opinion.
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04-01-05, 11:27 AM
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Loyalty proven
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IP: 6410 8237
yea and to let yall know, i thought it was just gone be me and 20. i didnt know it was gone be 20 people
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04-01-05, 04:59 PM
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You Love My Style.
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IP: 9561 AEC4
damn 2 long to listen..lol
It was cool, production didnt match at some times some kids were off i guess it was pretty good.
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04-02-05, 05:48 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 31E1 91F6
A piece of shit.
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04-04-05, 07:34 PM
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Only the Illist
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IP: 8BC7 013B
im upping this for feed and 7/3 this is the first time ive upped it in like 3 days so if u dont like it to bad
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04-04-05, 08:17 PM
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...Belong...
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IP: ECB3 36A0
rtf...what happened to it?...
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04-04-05, 09:19 PM
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FuxJustAWord
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IP: 3B27 2020
^^ lol, not ONE outa the 10 rtf'ed..... ud think it was a gold mine to leave feedback on this track...
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04-05-05, 02:40 PM
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tha illest
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IP: 3240 794D
i like the first beat. the second beat is asssss. shoulda kept the first one rollin the whole way thru. but lets get into it. the intro was gaaaaaaaayyyy. take it out on the reel homez. an intro is like a first impression on the rest of ur tracks. so u gotta shine with the beginnin. the first dude had good presence but was below average when it comes to lyrics an flow. the lady mix up gurl has good presence. i like ur voice alot. chorus i actually aint feelin. get jizzed? seems kinda gay to me.. all in all i dont think this track was n e thing amazing. i mean for havin 10 peeps on it i would think that at least 3 peeople would shine over the rest but to me it just seemed kinda... blah. when a diff person cuts in it kinda sounds like u didnt mix it rite. some ppl were alrite but for the most part this was just adverage in my eyes. u done better...
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04-05-05, 06:30 PM
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IP: 9466 7A91
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^yea thas wut i thought
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