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10-26-06, 07:20 PM | #1 | |||||||
Herb
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'' Life is Crazy''
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ya see my life gets crazier each second i live it/
living life in the fast lane im a ride to the finish/ but if i finish before my time has come/ rest easy all my soldiers i lived and died by the gun/ see its hotter than hell when you riding on top/ thinking your untouchable theres no way youll be stopped/ but/ you never know what tomarrow could bring/ you could be slanging the rock/ or pushing the range/ when some niggas run up on you and pop three in ya frame/ you wont know what hit you till ya mommas crying in the rain/ but see thats just part of the game/ you gotta put ya life on the line if you wanna get fame/ its 5 stars and 3 for the stripes/ thats truth love loyalty wisdom and honor for life/ thats the code that i live by and trust me i get by/ but yeah lifes depressing thats why i stay high/ ill blow smoke to the sky watching time fly by/ while im writing these rhymes knowing one day ill die/ but thats one thing that i hope happens later than sooner/ cuz if it happend sooner than later/ id never know if im destined to be greater than pac was/ 6 months before he got shot up/ to all my soldiers locked down like the trapped in a box/ impatiently waiting to get out liek a jack in the box/ and once they do they back in just for slanging the rock/ its a vicious cycle so tell me when does it stop/ the truth is it never does till you take a slow ride in a hearse and whats worse is its a gift & a curse ive put in work and done dirt now im spitting a verse/ and ive had my heart broken but ive never been hurt/ we got pastor mase joining with the snitches division/ i thought they tought him better than that in the catholic religion/ aint a unanimus desicion this a tko./ a lyrical hommicide no a verbal deathstroke ya know/ and its a shame how that beef can creep/ youll think someones ya boy till they catch you asleep/ thats y i make it a point never to sleep/ i got my eyes wide open and my ears to the streets/ i cant lose man failure isnt in my vocabulary/ but for some reason all of my adversaries / still try to test me cops try to arrest me what is it thats hexed me or is it a blessing/ i cant tell man and trust its got me stressing/ and now my backs to the wall cuz this is my lesson/ to the weak the strong and the powerless/ cuz this song aint for beef just empowerment/ and constructive critisism form the people of rv would be much apreciated this is going to be on my demo so i need to know what i should tweak or not good lookin out soldiers stay up |
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10-26-06, 07:57 PM | #2 | |||||||
illmatic
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IP: 10D7 5181
Decent verse homy. multis were okay. Nothing special but still good.Same with punchlines. 6/10
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10-27-06, 07:10 PM | #3 | |||||
Human Crack in The Flesh.
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I liked the verse, I would like to here it on audio tho... Return the Fav. and Vote For the battle verse on my Battle with Flip
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10-27-06, 07:10 PM | #4 | |||||
Human Crack in The Flesh.
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And dont forget to put links or the Modz will close it
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