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04-30-04, 12:18 AM | #16 | |||||
STiLL Da FUKKiN SiCKEST!!
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IP: 3240 794D
jea goodlooks niggaz datz 5-0
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U NOT FUKKiN WiTH ME PLaiN N SiMP!... Da "SiCKEST ON DiS SiTE" LiNE HaS BEEN USED aGaiNST ME 50 x'S...U DUDES aBUSED iT |
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04-30-04, 12:54 AM | #17 | ||||||
swift chancellor
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IP: 4289 77F4
Vote- Marv
Simply for the fact that King didn't really have any punches. It was all just flowing and rhyming but there was no real impact...that's obviously a no no in text battling. Also, fix your structures guys. That shit comes off as really n00bish with all of the punctuation marks everywhere and // at the end and shit.
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tobacco pipe smoker escobar, your life is over justify the righteous nova bullets flew out his right shoulder |
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05-01-04, 08:46 AM | #18 | |||||
STiLL Da FUKKiN SiCKEST!!
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IP: 8764 0826
its ova..................
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U NOT FUKKiN WiTH ME PLaiN N SiMP!... Da "SiCKEST ON DiS SiTE" LiNE HaS BEEN USED aGaiNST ME 50 x'S...U DUDES aBUSED iT |
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05-02-04, 09:02 AM | #19 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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IP: 275E DC37
breakdown for king solo:
flow:choppy almost everyline was kinda streched to fit the punch 5/10 volcab:alright kinda basic though 5/10 punches:most of the lines were kinda played or just plain weak you did have alot of them though my fav,"I’ll inject u wit an allergy have u looking fatter than Bizarre//" not too bad 6/10 overall:16/30 breakdown for marvolousj1009: flow:alright alittle off in the lines through the middle of the verse but on more then king's 6/10 volcab:good use nothing amazing though 6/10 punches:best line,"u say im pussy? u "dont know who u fuckin with" like a "blind man havin sex"-" some of the lines were played but overall better then king's 7/10 overall:19/30 vote--marvolousj1009
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
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05-03-04, 09:31 AM | #20 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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IP: 275E DC37
7-0 marvolousj1009 wins this
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
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