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06-13-05, 10:21 PM | #16 | ||||
GG Haterz
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IP: 1CED 2D46
It's weird, god...Thanks though. Told ya it would be close DQ....
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06-14-05, 09:59 AM | #17 | |||||||
Evolution
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IP: 0DD2 7DAA
ok i dont know if im allowed to vote on this but imma vote anyway if not then just leave it as feed.....
i liked this battle both showed emotion and both had a really good imagination...... DQ: Emotion: nice emotion in here i really liked this as a story to tell someone or somthing, nice twist at the end which was reall effective in this piece... imagination: your imagination was dope, you had some decent shit in there, i liked your vocabualry aswell that really set the piece off... originality: ight the originality in this was superb lol... nice stroy to it never heard it before a little twist at the end and alot of thinks that describe whats happeneing nice.. flow: now the flow was really good u had multies which made it sound smooth, good gonig on that one... overall i felt you had a real strong topical here topic was hard if u ask me but u flipped it and made a dope piece out of it well done... The Rev: emotion: emotion in this wasn't as good as DQ's because it was more of a comedy act if you get me.. the emotion to do with the comedy was good but if u were getting serious near te end then u shouldav put more emotion into maybe? imaginaition: now.. i really like the twist in this the comedy act was god am i right? (so help me if i'm wrong) that was one of the reasons i liked this because it explains all the things thats happening or happened and you laugh it off while everyone else was shocked lol nice job on that one... originality: this was original easily... god doing a stand up act joking about people dying and shit that was dope lol it kept me interested all the way through n i couldn't wait untill the end lol... flow: ok the flow was good... wasn't as good as DQ's but still it was decent.. kind of choppy in places if you ask me but it aint no biggi... overall u had a solid pieceand a bvery enjoyable verse... good job.. imma vote rev on this one because i felt he went deeper into is topic and covered more areas of it, he also had a more interesting verse... no hate DQ but i think Rev got it... v/ The Rev |
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06-20-05, 02:02 AM | #18 | ||||
L.E
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IP: BEF6 4DB8
The Revelation wins by 2 votes....
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