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09-21-06, 09:45 PM | #16 | |||||||
Under Oath
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IP: F8C0 2149
Ok thanks for the votes............................
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09-21-06, 09:56 PM | #17 | |||||
~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP: 6168 7863
Sane-you took this pic nice..i liked where u were going with it..nice vocab
nice emotion and ya imagery was on point...u slightly edged this one out Sin-vocab was was on point, u flipped the words nicely,fit in spots perfect your imagery could have been upped...but i was feelin absolutely no emotion and thats really all a topical is about V/ sane for slightly edging this out
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09-21-06, 10:25 PM | #18 | |||||||
Under Oath
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IP: F8C0 2149
Well weather i win or loose i know im elevating and props to sane for all the votes.......
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09-21-06, 10:25 PM | #19 | |||||||
Under Oath
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IP: F8C0 2149
Ill be back next season !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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09-22-06, 11:58 AM | #20 | |||
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IP: 0825 899A
i think sane's drop sucked personally, it was very stop and go and all in all the entire thing bored me ... it felt like it took forever to hit the end. sin's was much more fluent, in terms of actual flow aswell as contectually. sin took a more poetic approach so i found his lines to much more creative and interesting, while again, sane's just bored the fuck out of me, i really struggled to even finish reading it becuase it just wasnt doing anything.
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09-22-06, 11:31 PM | #21 | |||||||
Under Oath
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IP: F8C0 2149
See if everyone dident no show id have a chance....
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09-23-06, 02:05 AM | #22 | ||||||
Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
Sane wins, But Iam wild carding Loosenuse to third round.
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