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Old 05-23-04, 09:29 PM   #1
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bostonlyrcist vs. will s. unyu

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battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern
check in by wedsday
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votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
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no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 line min.
16 line max.
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Old 05-24-04, 04:52 AM   #2
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sup niccahs

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Ayo Bl Is Here Holla At Cha Boi,lets Keep It Movin
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BOSTON LYRICIST

 
Old 05-25-04, 08:56 PM   #3
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I am SO going to rape you
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Old 05-27-04, 05:04 AM   #4
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lets keep it movin

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okay,okay,pay attention

victim # 2, too bad so sad--
your flows belong in the desktop recycle bag--
have you nervous like you fucked a bitch raw on her rag--
std inflicted,combined with my lyrical characteristic--
your minds not capabale of decoding my rap linguistics--
i eat, sleep,shit this rap and piss it--
steppin up will get you gunned down like j's last video--
i would call you a dick rida but you more like a titty hoe--
no toilette at home is why your name fits--
your opponents quickly flush cause your flow gives them the shits--
i sit here and watch you decompose as this flowetic power grows--
you a fag you thought nelly wanted you to take off your clothes--
you rape me i aint no bitch off the street--
i'll turn you into an idustry hoe have you eatin out dr phil and tweat--
and let them shit and piss on you while they skeet--
cange your name to (you can S. unme) for the rest of the week---

thats enough im out do what eva yall do wit it---hollah 100
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Old 05-27-04, 02:57 PM   #5
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Kid think he's tough,on a roster of a fake team
I mean,anyone can eat a boston baked bean
You're about the Bling Bling and all the flossin
But on the low-how many GOOD rappers come from Boston?
So I'm a bring it home,Boston? is NOT strong
But we all still love you-Like a fuckin kidney stone
III cant stand when you're on my dick cause you lack lust!
Me on I's all<------make sense when you read it backwards!
This battle was no sweat, none of your punches harm me
But you do still have a chance to win-WE ARE ON THE NEW RB!
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If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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Old 05-27-04, 09:36 PM   #6
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Wow... boston that sucked. Will sun you wins, even though that verse was pretty weak too, at least it had some flow to it.

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no toilette at home is why your name fits--
your opponents quickly flush cause your flow gives them the shits--"

^ wtf!?

stuff like that should never be in a verse.
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Old 05-28-04, 01:41 AM   #7
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once again...another weak battle

will s. got this though, boston just came horrible, will's best line was his closer....so true

vote = will
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Old 05-28-04, 06:16 AM   #8
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DAMN!!!
this is another weak battle

neither of u had any real flow but will u had better flow than boston. both ure structures sucked ass big time. u had no real punches and both of y'all really need to elevate a lot. there was no creativity in ure spits, no decent wordplay or personals. frankly i don't think either of u came at all strong but i'm gonna give the battle to will cuz he had a little more flow than boston and his punches were slightly better.

V/ - Will S. Unyu
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Old 05-29-04, 08:07 AM   #9
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If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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Old 05-29-04, 06:06 PM   #10
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breakdown for bostonlyricist:

flow:alittle sloppy you did betteor here last week 6/10

volcab:average nothing too special 5/10

punches:some alright lines nothing new mainly played ideas fav line,"have you nervous like you fucked a bitch raw on her rag--" 6/10

overall=17/30

breakdown for will s. unyu:

flow:workin basic though 6/10

volcab:nothing to talk about here you need work 5/10

punches:no real lines i liked you addressed the oppenent though i don't know just not liking most of it 5/10

overall:16/30

vote--bostonlyricist
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Old 05-29-04, 06:22 PM   #11
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Aiyo Check it..

Boston: 2/10
WeaK Spit, Lacked Every Aspect A Decent Verse Should HAve Put Into It....Where Was The Creativitie and Effort?

Will S Unyu: 3/10
Weak Spit, Lacked ALmost Every Aspect A Decent Verse Should Have...But You Had Sum Punches...Congrats...Elevate

Elvate The Both Of You!!

Vote - Will

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Old 05-30-04, 01:25 AM   #12
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Quote:
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breakdown for bostonlyricist:

flow:alittle sloppy you did betteor here last week 6/10

volcab:average nothing too special 5/10

punches:some alright lines nothing new mainly played ideas fav line,"have you nervous like you fucked a bitch raw on her rag--" 6/10

overall=17/30

breakdown for will s. unyu:

flow:workin basic though 6/10

volcab:nothing to talk about here you need work 5/10

punches:no real lines i liked you addressed the oppenent though i don't know just not liking most of it 5/10

overall:16/30

vote--bostonlyricist

looooooooooooooooooooooooooool
you DID notice that you was the only one that voted against me
right?
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If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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Old 05-30-04, 02:02 AM   #13
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Blah.....no explaination needed

Will S Unyu wins.....
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Old 05-30-04, 02:17 AM   #14
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Domination anyone.....Boston gave no challange Litterally Will got him in Every Catagory.

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Old 05-30-04, 08:45 PM   #15
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will s. unyu wins i mainly voted to break the shut out i don't like to see people get shut out
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