lets go 14...

http://www.community.rapverse.com/s...d=1#post2753846
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2760495

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yeah yeah nigga

14's good.

nameplays on me are old, check it out, its easily done
you not aMountain to nothin.
you Rushmore lines than anyone. see how easy it comes?
but heres the bright side, look below cuz ya want the truth, right
i'd love to help ya elevate.
so i'll put ya 6 feet under to bring ya career to new heights
i know i’m the truth. you know it as well so don’t lie hoe
cuz if your Yung..
.. that gives me another reason to want to die old
i'll treat rappers like ex pills, look kid, i pop a few
ya verse makes me cough n' puke.
when it comes to fixin it up, like construction.. ya got a Lot to do
i'm that nigga, everyone checks out Rush Lingo, he's cold with his
the 90% of effort ya put in ya verse proves ^ that Geico wrote ya shit
i’m eatin you slow. when i write i laugh at this nerds aggression/
make you ahead of the line for death – only time theres a 1st Impression
everytime Yung writin a verse voters is thinking the dude is borin
no fans at all – fact is his family tree isn’t even rootin for em

don't be late dawg

he said to give him til 1215... if its cool with you

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&postcount=1204
^^
rush wins battles cuz of help. its kinda sad, im embarrass for u ho.
cuz not only did he write for u, but ya ass still lost 4 weeks in a row.
you known for pastin lines. so u postin a verse, should be no stress.
only because this kid jumps on bars faster than hyper kids at recess.
u a poor fat kid. ya on here tryna act proper, kid thats just no right.
wheneva u say 'I practially live on RV' we no u aint talkin bout this site.
all my bars are ill. wheneva i post my nice verses, all u can do is wish.
now ya record is 4-4, so ur shootin the right percentage of wackness.
lets just be foreal kid. your skills & style and league will neva blend in.
reason they put ya dumb ass inthe bye week, hope'll neva comeback again...


only had time for...

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if u give me another 10 minutes i'll edit it in, but if not, i'll leave the verse at that..

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everytime Yung writin a verse voters is thinking the dude is borin
no fans at all – fact is his family tree isn’t even rootin for em
^^absolutes stole that concept from rb.. and its pretty much the exact same wording

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abso who?

i'll be the first to admit i recycled that from like 2 years ago cuz i ain't have a 14th line =/

^^
i dunno if u stole, but its played as hell, let the votin begin...

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dont sway lil nigga

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228914
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228904
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228901
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228899

i know i’m the truth. you know it as well so don’t lie hoe
cuz if your Yung..
.. that gives me another reason to want to die old
i’m eatin you slow. when i write i laugh at this nerds aggression/
make you ahead of the line for death – only time theres a 1st Impression
everytime Yung writin a verse voters is thinking the dude is borin
no fans at all – fact is his family tree isn’t even rootin for em

all very nice lines. concepts were good and some well wording in there.

vs.

rush wins battles cuz of help. its kinda sad, im embarrass for u ho.
cuz not only did he write for u, but ya ass still lost 4 weeks in a row.
u a poor fat kid. ya on here tryna act proper, kid thats just no right.
wheneva u say 'I practially live on RV' we no u aint talkin bout this site.

And that's how it do.

Your second line woulda been good, but .. bar wordplay is played. Just.. like that.

My vote will go to Rush Lingo for more quotables.

Yung, ya styles cool but ya need better concepts.

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