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Old 05-28-06, 01:05 PM   #1
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39. Lex Close (0-0) vs. 40. *** (0-0)

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Old 05-28-06, 01:35 PM   #2
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check


no more than 14 lines
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Old 05-28-06, 03:07 PM   #3
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check bitch stfu and match how many i drop
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Old 05-28-06, 06:03 PM   #4
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oooooo

little testy are we
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Old 05-28-06, 08:08 PM   #5
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stfu and plus im only going 10
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Old 05-28-06, 10:27 PM   #6
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10 is fine with me
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Old 05-29-06, 10:56 AM   #7
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I lied Fag....

You toss up,rotate,transform your rhyme,Ur wasting time.
Cuz ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^...is acronym of you flipping lines.
Uve been pwn'd biter,It disgusting you act like a whore to.
Im 2 far ahead of you...
....atleast you got sumthing to look foward to.
I spit,you burst into flames,Punches'll beating you worse.
Now Im wreckin this board..
..........While ppl. get ^^^ just reading ur verse.
lex will polly no show?fuck it,why rack up Gayconcepts on clearance
We knew lex into guise..An I aint talkin bout appearance.
He's never heard of Adam Sandler; Which is not a surprise ..
but he's seen The Longest Yard.
............. Ive slapped mine in his mouth a couple of times.
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but ill..
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take time to diss a girl.. pfft y’all the same.. just different utensils
her useless paper comes from under a skirt, yours from under ya pencil
this niggaz rattled with anguished tossed and amazement
your shits allways a best cellar
but next time bitch keep it in the basement
jus face it your a nobody famous like g-unit to prove it bitch
i asked my mans if he knew you he was like umm "WHOOO KID"


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Old 05-30-06, 08:31 PM   #8
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why is my biter sense going off at his verse

Dudes stressing over the line limit and being a douche, going 10 over
This bitch is getting all twisted out of shape when he usually just bends over
And This dude loves balls too, whether he juggles or catches
Either way, he's pro-sac enough to fucking cure depression
Tryna find a place alone to rap, with your gaudy flow
Cuz the walls have ears…so they’re glad as fuck you don’t do audio
With flow that fucked, he shouldn’t be afraid of prison like other dudes are
Why should he worry about showers when he’ll never drop a smooth bar
But he’d do it on purpose, really, he’d love to get some man love in prison
And I’ll bring this guy to his knees, but its not like he aint used to the position
The fuck kinda alias is that? Your so laim dude
But if was known to be that wack, Id edit out my own name too
3 stars? You retard, think your dope, get the fuck outta here
cuz he's just like real stars: he’ll blow up in maybe 10 thousand years
Even one peep at your verse *** and we’re all sick
Cuz similar to another Starr, The View makes us nauseous
Talking bout your 1 in a million? There’s thousand like you or better
Cuz the only thing that’s 1-1,000,000 is your battle record
n i was s'posed to come in with puns, punches and the dopest stuff
but then i realized *** is enough of a joke for the both of us
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Old 05-30-06, 09:16 PM   #9
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iight upp..........
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Old 05-31-06, 10:22 AM   #10
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You toss up,rotate,transform your rhyme,Ur wasting time.
Cuz ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^...is acronym of you flipping lines.
Uve been pwn'd biter,It disgusting you act like a whore to.
Im 2 far ahead of you...
....atleast you got sumthing to look foward to.
He's never heard of Adam Sandler; Which is not a surprise ..
but he's seen The Longest Yard.
............. Ive slapped mine in his mouth a couple of times.
(a bit....gay?)
this niggaz rattled with anguished tossed and amazement
your shits allways a best cellar
but next time bitch keep it in the basement

coupla other decent bars too, the guise line was played though.

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Tryna find a place alone to rap, with your gaudy flow
Cuz the walls have ears…so they’re glad as fuck you don’t do audio
With flow that fucked, he shouldn’t be afraid of prison like other dudes are
Why should he worry about showers when he’ll never drop a smooth bar
(sorta played, aite flip)
The fuck kinda alias is that? Your so laim dude
But if was known to be that wack, Id edit out my own name too
3 stars? You retard, think your dope, get the fuck outta here
cuz he's just like real stars: he’ll blow up in maybe 10 thousand years



Ehh, i think * got it just cause the rest of his bars had a punch whereas a coupla lexes wernt direct.

not bad.

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Old 05-31-06, 04:18 PM   #11
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iight uppin.......
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Old 05-31-06, 04:23 PM   #12
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You toss up,rotate,transform your rhyme,Ur wasting time.
Cuz ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^...is acronym of you flipping lines.
Uve been pwn'd biter,It disgusting you act like a whore to.
Im 2 far ahead of you...
....atleast you got sumthing to look foward to.
He's never heard of Adam Sandler; Which is not a surprise ..
but he's seen The Longest Yard.
............. Ive slapped mine in his mouth a couple of times.
^like Daubs sed.. the line was a little gayish here
(3)

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Tryna find a place alone to rap, with your gaudy flow
Cuz the walls have ears…so they’re glad as fuck you don’t do audio
(1)

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Old 05-31-06, 04:52 PM   #13
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You toss up,rotate,transform your rhyme,Ur wasting time.
Cuz ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^...is acronym of you flipping lines
I spit,you burst into flames,Punches'll beating you worse.
Now Im wreckin this board..
..........While ppl. get ^^^ just reading ur verse
EVEN THOUGH BOARD WORDPLAY IS PLAYED
take time to diss a girl.. pfft y’all the same.. just different utensils
her useless paper comes from under a skirt, yours from under ya pencil
this niggaz rattled with anguished tossed and amazement
your shits allways a best cellar
but next time bitch keep it in the basement


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Tryna find a place alone to rap, with your gaudy flow
Cuz the walls have ears…so they’re glad as fuck you don’t do audio
With flow that fucked, he shouldn’t be afraid of prison like other dudes are
Why should he worry about showers when he’ll never drop a smooth bar


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Old 05-31-06, 04:53 PM   #14
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You toss up,rotate,transform your rhyme,Ur wasting time.
Cuz ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^...is acronym of you flipping lines.
Uve been pwn'd biter,It disgusting you act like a whore to.
Im 2 far ahead of you...
....atleast you got sumthing to look foward to.
He's never heard of Adam Sandler; Which is not a surprise ..
but he's seen The Longest Yard.
............. Ive slapped mine in his mouth a couple of times.



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Tryna find a place alone to rap, with your gaudy flow
Cuz the walls have ears…so they’re glad as fuck you don’t do audio


v/ ***
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Old 05-31-06, 08:11 PM   #15
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Uve been pwn'd biter,It disgusting you act like a whore to.
Im 2 far ahead of you...
....atleast you got sumthing to look foward to.
I spit,you burst into flames,Punches'll beating you worse.
Now Im wreckin this board..
..........While ppl. get ^^^ just reading ur verse.



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Dudes stressing over the line limit and being a douche, going 10 over
This bitch is getting all twisted out of shape when he usually just bends over
The fuck kinda alias is that? Your so laim dude
But if was known to be that wack, Id edit out my own name too
Talking bout your 1 in a million? There’s thousand like you or better
Cuz the only thing that’s 1-1,000,000 is your battle record
^ could of been worded better.


v/Lex

thought he came better. his verse was pretty solid, wasn't really feeling some punches from *** .. also he need to word his shit better.
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