Vaskez

Man, there's so many peeps on Mim's dick, the unfairness is felt
So's no wonder, when they hit up his battles...
.................................................A LL the hits are below the belt
(Played)
Dunno why tho, dude's worse than most, I always said he's wack
N carrying a rucksack is the only time he's ahead of the 'pack
(Nah)
When he attacks, I'ma react calmly in this cold place
I ain't batting an eyelid, I'm damn well batting his whole face
(Not feeling, sorry. I didn't like the concept at all)
I'ma let ya soul waste, maybe ya felt good 'fore this started
But after I rip ya organs out...
....................................it'll be hard not to be disheartened
(Meh, again not feeling)
Heard Mim's audios? Wackness to me, but some might care for it
They listen intently with heart and mind...
...............................................cos their ears can't bear the shit
(Ok I guess. I've seen this concept before though)
I can almost say ya raps are out of this world, n ya skilled
Cos if ya voice was pitched any higher...
..............................it'd escape earth's gravitational field
(Lol)
In the race for KO's, these 2 d/r each other, I seen the signs
How's Mim top 5 on RV, when he's always cuming in 9th?!
(Lol, gay jokes are played but this was very well executed)
Damn both y'all bars suck, poor flow, s'hard to see the rhymes
N there's no hidden meanings...
.............but peeps STILL read better shit BETWEEN the lines
(Nah)
Plus, seen Mim's pic? Get ya weight up 'fore ya start shit
There's enough skin n bones on display...
.........................................to start an ivory/furs market
(Coulda been worded better but he is very skinny)
And that 9th kid's garbage, I'ma smack the punk hard
But at least he KNOWS his place...
........................................chillin in a fuckin junk yard
(Ok)

Datrus

Mim, this is just for you dawg...

Whether you like it or not, ya credibility is shot after I gun you
I mean how you dissing me after it took you ONE WEEK to mod me in 1-2
(No, poorly worded and didn't hit)
Ya know it's funny your a pussy and that ya hairy n' mean
Damn, I felt bad when I learned that your alergic to dairy, queen
(Little more than a statement)
Punk ya rep ain't clean, you get blamed for bad shaped votes
So I'm a put you in a chokehold that you can't escape, goat
(Wack threat and gay concept)
I'm hearing the hecklers, they sayin' ya the worst of the sector
Ya know bitch, all ya simple shit is ONLY overheads on projectors
(Played and poorly worded)
And your ugly as fuck too, no one's wants to hang with this gay
N' MAYBE you wouldn't be the last resort...
... if ya looks didn't scare the tide away
(Haha dope)

9th, you've always been a fucking clown...

I know nameplays are played to the worst, but yo this shit should hurt
How the fuck can someone with NINE degrees not write ONE good verse
(Extremely played nameplay)
N' ya raps sound like shit too, they like just one high scream
Ya career's had such a rocky road...
... I'm surprised you haven't given up to sell ice cream
(Nah)
Cuz dawg ya fat n' like goodies while I like a good book that's jumpin'
But when I think of a best seller, I just think of ANY you're locked up in
(Lol coulda been worded better but good wordplay)
This hated bitch is never is humpin', you can make a female hurl, man
North Korean troops couldn't destroy so much of a Soeul as ya girls can
(What's it saying? You said in the opener that he makes females hurl like he can't get a girl and then said his girls destroy Soeul's suggesting he actually has girls. Needs to be worded better man)
N' that ya ugly as fuck is the word, but yeah one thing is for sure
If looks could kill...
... you'd be wanted enough to make Karl Rove much more secure
(Played as fuck)




9th Degree

I've been known to show backbone when brawlin' in the verbal way
And you're my necks victim...until I crack ya vertebrae
(Blah, worded poorly)
My fist'll form an alliance with your jaw, have you bruised worse
But you're the only one to blame, 'cuz apparantley DaTrusHurtz
(If you've ever been on RB you'd know this is one of the most nameplays there is)
Word, and when we call you a herb we ain't lyin'
Your wackness roseMary, Joseph, and even the 3 Wisemen
(Lol)
Plus you fight like a pussy, throw kicks at the guys n'
Have 'em catchin' enough foot-balls to win the damn Heisman
(Nah)
Mim didn't need your help in PLL, leave him alone
'Cuz even Tom Hanks knows bitches need A League of Their Own
(Nope)
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Vaskez? Shit, you don't want in this war zone, g
You just call a Trus...
...and ask him to come home 'cuz you're lonely
(No)
Since your girl dipped, and showed up at my house bare
We went nuts...
...or at least she liked to Planter mouth there
(Lmao)
While givin' me road head, then grabbed a phone and dropped your number
To say she got a flat tire...'cuz I fuckin' popped the rubber
(Meh)
Face it, you're a loser, and I'm sorry my truth's ownin'
But you're such a long distance from winnin'...
...L.I. charged you for roamin'
(Lol nice)
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I schooled you fucks in text, all your shit's lookin' forced
And now I just got you tuition that you never took this course
(Ok, could be worded better though)


Mimesis

That shit is fucking GARBAGE.. and I now know that ya rhymes losing
At least you said it was for a laugh......cause that's all that I'm doing
(Lol nice)
With your fuckin accent, trashy punches.. cant believe this man raps
And with flow so off.. you got people on the site setting up sand bags
(Blah)
You're a fucking fag.. but my intro is confusing, you ain't stayin tough
I don't know why I asked people to play your lines..
..cause your lines are played enough
(Played)
Just ridiculous... but your elevation is slow... why does this herb write?
Vas been texting for over 6 MONTHS and STILL can't rhyme words right
(Good personal coz sometimes he does have strange rhymeschemes)
One syllable rhyming.. newb shit, but fuck that, you got nothing to lose
..I don't even need to add punches to show Hurt is still cumming in you
(Nah not good, Vaskez's gay joke punch was way better)


DaTrusHurtz, you're fucking garbage too.

But I thought we were keeping it clean?.. I knew nothing would stay fine
And I would follow DaTrus..
..if I wanted my verse to be generic punches and played lines
(Played)
Prewritten bullshit.. trash.. but in the PLL, I did ask you for help one time
And I only asked you to mod in hopes that you wouldn't post a punchline
(decent)
Savin the league.. and lookin at the sponsors, it's ill.. but whats worse is
You're only a Mix Champ..
..cause you put together the best lines from other people's verses
(lol nice)
Some herb shit.. you were predicted to lose.. you wanna know why, kid?
Cause I've done better then you in EVERY fucking league that I've tried in
(Statement and isn't true either. He did much better than you in LLLjr)
Should be hidin.. Instead of stepping to us.. you suck, dont you see queer
Your leaving such a Yung Impression..
..I thought I was battling the team that should be here
(Good closer)

Overall this battle disapointed the fuck outa me. This is the weakest I've seen Vaskez come in over a month and Datrus is simply following his long string of weak verses. Vaskez's punches just weren't harsh at all and barely even connected. He had the pitch land the cummin 9th but that was about it. Maybe he's just exhausted all his good lines in LLL but he definitely came much worse than usual here Datrus came played and not hitting hard at all. He had the tide and seller/cellar line but the rest was either worded shitty or played. 9th came worse than usual too but the planter mouth line was probably the best of the battle. Mimesis came ok, probably the best out of everyone but som of his lines were just stamenets too. He had a few quotables here and there like the for a laugh, mixchamp and yung impressionz lines but apart from that there was nothing that stood out and the most of the rest was played.

It was close but Mimesis and 9th had more decent lines, though not by much.

V/ 9th Degree and Mimesis

VASK

When he attacks, I'ma react calmly in this cold place
I ain't batting an eyelid, I'm damn well batting his whole face
I'ma let ya soul waste, maybe ya felt good 'fore this started
But after I rip ya organs out...
....................................it'll be hard not to be disheartened
Heard Mim's audios? Wackness to me, but some might care for it
They listen intently with heart and mind...
...............................................cos their ears can't bear the shit
I can almost say ya raps are out of this world, n ya skilled
Cos if ya voice was pitched any higher...
..............................it'd escape earth's gravitational field
Plus, seen Mim's pic? Get ya weight up 'fore ya start shit
There's enough skin n bones on display...
.........................................to start an ivory/furs market
And that 9th kid's garbage, I'ma smack the punk hard
But at least he KNOWS his place...
........................................chillin in a fuckin junk yard

6 quotables

DTR

Punk ya rep ain't clean, you get blamed for bad shaped votes
So I'm a put you in a chokehold that you can't escape, goat
And your ugly as fuck too, no one's wants to hang with this gay
N' MAYBE you wouldn't be the last resort...
... if ya looks didn't scare the tide away
Cuz dawg ya fat n' like goodies while I like a good book that's jumpin'
But when I think of a best seller, I just think of ANY you're locked up in


3 quotables

TEAM TOTAL: 9.


9th

I've been known to show backbone when brawlin' in the verbal way
And you're my necks victim...until I crack ya vertebrae
Plus you fight like a pussy, throw kicks at the guys n'
Have 'em catchin' enough foot-balls to win the damn Heisman
Mim didn't need your help in PLL, leave him alone
'Cuz even Tom Hanks knows bitches need A League of Their Own
Vaskez? Shit, you don't want in this war zone, g
You just call a Trus...
...and ask him to come home 'cuz you're lonely
Since your girl dipped, and showed up at my house bare
We went nuts...
...or at least she liked to Planter mouth there
Face it, you're a loser, and I'm sorry my truth's ownin'
But you're such a long distance from winnin'...
...L.I. charged you for roamin'
I schooled you fucks in text, all your shit's lookin' forced
And now I just got you tuition that you never took this course


7 quotables


Mim

That shit is fucking GARBAGE.. and I now know that ya rhymes losing
At least you said it was for a laugh......cause that's all that I'm doing
Just ridiculous... but your elevation is slow... why does this herb write?
Vas been texting for over 6 MONTHS and STILL can't rhyme words right
But I thought we were keeping it clean?.. I knew nothing would stay fine
And I would follow DaTrus..
..if I wanted my verse to be generic punches and played lines
Prewritten bullshit.. trash.. but in the PLL, I did ask you for help one time
And I only asked you to mod in hopes that you wouldn't post a punchline
Savin the league.. and lookin at the sponsors, it's ill.. but whats worse is
You're only a Mix Champ..
..cause you put together the best lines from other people's verses
Some herb shit.. you were predicted to lose.. you wanna know why, kid?
Cause I've done better then you in EVERY fucking league that I've tried in
Should be hidin.. Instead of stepping to us.. you suck, dont you see queer
Your leaving such a Yung Impression..
..I thought I was battling the team that should be here

7 quoatables.


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Wow, mims verse on DTR was fuckin heavy, no hate but 9th and mim clearly had the more quotables.
You seemed better last week than this week cask, sorry NO HATE.

props all.

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Vaskez:

Man, there's so many peeps on Mim's dick, the unfairness is felt
So's no wonder, when they hit up his battles...
.................................................A LL the hits are below the belt
ok, not really feeling it much
Dunno why tho, dude's worse than most, I always said he's wack
N carrying a rucksack is the only time he's ahead of the 'pack
lol... kool wordplay
When he attacks, I'ma react calmly in this cold place
I ain't batting an eyelid, I'm damn well batting his whole face
nice punch
I'ma let ya soul waste, maybe ya felt good 'fore this started
But after I rip ya organs out...
....................................it'll be hard not to be disheartened
i'm sure ive seen that before somewhere, nice punch none the less
Heard Mim's audios? Wackness to me, but some might care for it
They listen intently with heart and mind...
...............................................cos their ears can't bear the shit
nice personal
I can almost say ya raps are out of this world, n ya skilled
Cos if ya voice was pitched any higher...
..............................it'd escape earth's gravitational field
lmao.. best punch yet
In the race for KO's, these 2 d/r each other, I seen the signs
How's Mim top 5 on RV, when he's always cuming in 9th?!
ooo. pullin em out nice personal n nameplay
Damn both y'all bars suck, poor flow, s'hard to see the rhymes
N there's no hidden meanings...
.............but peeps STILL read better shit BETWEEN the lines
simple.. but effective
Plus, seen Mim's pic? Get ya weight up 'fore ya start shit
There's enough skin n bones on display...
.........................................to start an ivory/furs market
lol... nice wordplay and punch
And that 9th kid's garbage, I'ma smack the punk hard
But at least he KNOWS his place...
........................................chillin in a fuckin junk yard
umm ok. not as ghood as the others though

overall decent verse you had some nice punches, and some ok punches. there was a couple i didn't really like but everyone has them in their verses. structure was good and your wordplay was decent deffinatly the stronger of the two verses.

DTH:

Whether you like it or not, ya credibility is shot after I gun you
I mean how you dissing me after it took you ONE WEEK to mod me in 1-2
ok opener shouldav been worded better though
Ya know it's funny your a pussy and that ya hairy n' mean
Damn, I felt bad when I learned that your alergic to dairy, queen
not feeling this one much
Punk ya rep ain't clean, you get blamed for bad shaped votes
So I'm a put you in a chokehold that you can't escape, goat

I'm hearing the hecklers, they sayin' ya the worst of the sector
Ya know bitch, all ya simple shit is ONLY overheads on projectors
ok i suppose
And your ugly as fuck too, no one's wants to hang with this gay
N' MAYBE you wouldn't be the last resort...
... if ya looks didn't scare the tide away
best punch in your verse yet

9th, you've always been a fucking clown...

I know nameplays are played to the worst, but yo this shit should hurt
How the fuck can someone with NINE degrees not write ONE good verse
lol nice
N' ya raps sound like shit too, they like just one high scream
Ya career's had such a rocky road...
... I'm surprised you haven't given up to sell ice cream
umm played? or did i not get it?
Cuz dawg ya fat n' like goodies while I like a good book that's jumpin'
But when I think of a best seller, I just think of ANY you're locked up in
lol didnt really hit hard though
This hated bitch is never is humpin', you can make a female hurl, man
North Korean troops couldn't destroy so much of a Soeul as ya girls can
ok.... pretty decent
N' that ya ugly as fuck is the word, but yeah one thing is for sure
If looks could kill...
... you'd be wanted enough to make Karl Rove much more secure
lol

ok i felt you had the weaker of the two verses... it was decent in some parts but weak in other parts.. i was expecting more when i peeped it...

Vs.

9th:

I've been known to show backbone when brawlin' in the verbal way
And you're my necks victim...until I crack ya vertebrae
nice wordplay and decent punch
My fist'll form an alliance with your jaw, have you bruised worse
But you're the only one to blame, 'cuz apparantley DaTrusHurtz
proper nameplay lol nice
Word, and when we call you a herb we ain't lyin'
Your wackness roseMary, Joseph, and even the 3 Wisemen
not bad
Plus you fight like a pussy, throw kicks at the guys n'
Have 'em catchin' enough foot-balls to win the damn Heisman
lol
Mim didn't need your help in PLL, leave him alone
'Cuz even Tom Hanks knows bitches need A League of Their Own
lmao nice punch
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Vaskez? Shit, you don't want in this war zone, g
You just call a Trus...
...and ask him to come home 'cuz you're lonely
haha pretty nice
Since your girl dipped, and showed up at my house bare
We went nuts...
...or at least she liked to Planter mouth there
lol.. this punch is pretty played
While givin' me road head, then grabbed a phone and dropped your number
To say she got a flat tire...'cuz I fuckin' popped the rubber
lol nice
Face it, you're a loser, and I'm sorry my truth's ownin'
But you're such a long distance from winnin'...
...L.I. charged you for roamin'
rofl.. nice bar
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I schooled you fucks in text, all your shit's lookin' forced
And now I just got you tuition that you never took this course
ok closure

dope verse... alot of nice punches some decent wordplay and nameplay. a couople punches were played but it didn't really hurt your verse coz you made up for it

Mim:

That shit is fucking GARBAGE.. and I now know that ya rhymes losing
At least you said it was for a laugh......cause that's all that I'm doing
lol nice opener.. effective
With your fuckin accent, trashy punches.. cant believe this man raps
And with flow so off.. you got people on the site setting up sand bags
lol nice punch
You're a fucking fag.. but my intro is confusing, you ain't stayin tough
I don't know why I asked people to play your lines..
..cause your lines are played enough
ok.. can be classed as played, but you worded it decent enough for me
Just ridiculous... but your elevation is slow... why does this herb write?
Vas been texting for over 6 MONTHS and STILL can't rhyme words right
lol ill personal
One syllable rhyming.. newb shit, but fuck that, you got nothing to lose
..I don't even need to add punches to show Hurt is still cumming in you
ooo... best punch of the battle.. lol looks like the comnig in 9th one but flipped alot better

DaTrusHurtz, you're fucking garbage too.

But I thought we were keeping it clean?.. I knew nothing would stay fine
And I would follow DaTrus..
..if I wanted my verse to be generic punches and played lines
ok.. reminds me of the other bar bout vaskez....
Prewritten bullshit.. trash.. but in the PLL, I did ask you for help one time
And I only asked you to mod in hopes that you wouldn't post a punchline
lol decent,
Savin the league.. and lookin at the sponsors, it's ill.. but whats worse is
You're only a Mix Champ..
..cause you put together the best lines from other people's verses
o shit lol... could be a fake personal?
Some herb shit.. you were predicted to lose.. you wanna know why, kid?
Cause I've done better then you in EVERY fucking league that I've tried in
lol nice personal there
Should be hidin.. Instead of stepping to us.. you suck, dont you see queer
Your leaving such a Yung Impression..
..I thought I was battling the team that should be here
lol ok closure

overall dopest verse out of the other 3 you had a better verse than 9th with more quotables.. nice shit
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ok.. now for the vote.

v/ 9th and mim

they were more consistant with their punches personals and wordplay... structure was overall better. and both stayed on target n shit... da trus let vaskez down.. his verse wasn't as good as his which was shamefull coz this couldav been a real close battle

dope shit though

no hate.

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i got the escape one, but not the rocky road one =/

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Sorry Vaskez, looks like I let ya down though it looks like the rocky road, dairy queen, and scapegoat lines were misunderstood by a few.

Could someone explain the LI roaming line on me? I just don't get it for some reason?

Thanks for the detailed votes guys

No problem, guess they won fair n square. Ah I've kinda lost my interest in text a bit recently anyway. Guess this is a good time to have a break

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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel

Word. Good battle.

Going to the finals, baby..

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Aint That A Bitch?

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Aint That A Bitch?

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