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07-22-05, 02:23 AM | #21 | |
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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Voted For: ~K-Trini~
If i keep rollin and i ceep merkin/ it'll be your jaw guy im hurtin/ wack no punch stop glorifyin urself Draw for the shank nd start insertin/ and i'll leave real blood still squirtin/ once again no punch In the night... you'll catch me lerkin/ I'll stab you in the back while your workin/ no punch Strangle you with some wire or string/ Body built upper-cut then i swing/ wack ur not hard so stop trying Ill brake your heart just like a disket/ and i wont find trini just like a comet/ wack didnt even rhyme :/ Come heavely just like the blitz/ and ill take you to parts and ill take you to bitz/ no punch really all ur lines were corny and played so work on creativity metaphores and vocab oh yea and try to put a personal in ur battle ok other kid no need to break it down ur flow was better but u had personasls all i can say is work on ur vocab and try not to use as many fillers
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