Topic: Quality
Verses Due: Jan 9
Voting Ends: Jan 12

Checkin In...
Nice topic Realist, It will be a little tuff

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g-luCk

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" Quality "

A step that paces further than other steps
Its a respect, that even the respected respect
Attracts the neglected, but they dont neglect it
Brings endless effect, and incourages the effected
Its a project projected... Ment to be perfected
A wide range elective, not yet elected
A present state dream, in relation to schemes
So far a big copy, the light has not gleamed...
Its the gun held inside the womb of a holster
You have seen bold, but this essence is bolder
Over time things grow old, but this never older
While objects struggle with weight... It has free shoulders
Others appear to be motionless, while this in motion
Potions come and go with lives, but not this potion
Ideas seam to reflect as this is the reflecter
You can press hard, But it handles the pressure
New things exhist, but this always exhisted
A passion to lift, but can this emotion be lifted?
Not a simple gift, the opener must be the gifted
there are twist's always solved, but this is to twisted
This leaves the patient with out any patience
Everything occupied while this is forever vacant
For the disabled flyers, this enables you to fly
All of your dis-likes could be solved simply by..........
a Better Quality...


( I hope everyone understands the similies and shit in there )

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Damn....DOPE from both... ...
This is a hard decision... ...

Word Usage: High Class
Better Story: K.Largo
Vocabulary: K.Largo
Creativity: K.Largo
Good Solid Flow: High Class

Damn Some close shit...
But i really think that K.Largo Edged it..
Shit was a good battle...Mad props to both
Ya both got some potental....
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Vote-K.Largo

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This was a great battle. I enjoyed the different apraches from the writters. Very creative.

K-L- Impressive verse, had a great detailed description on this topic made the reader want to keep going and the vocab and what not...was really good. I Enjoyed the openeing lines...they really helped your piece...because you opened smooth...then let the story go in the middle...and then finished with a slight edge...which i thought was impressive good work

High- Also a very impressive verse. i loved the similies in it and the wordplay that brought your verse into a great format of truth. because a lot of people i feel look at quality like that. and you word usage was okie some parts you elaveted but that wasnt really needed for the way you went about it. It was a good piece well done.

But overly I enjoyed K largos verse a little better. because with 'quality' high class you had roughly the same idea as me about it...which made it feel i was reading thoughts over again...so it wasnt as impressive because lots of people ask those questions and have those opinions..so it just seemed not basic but not perfection..no what i mean..to me the more complex verse was k largo slightly because of the different way he went about it

High Class...you had a great verse but..i just enjoyed the story line by K...good work though...keep it up

Vote K Largo

Peace.

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i'll hafta be tha one that goes against tha grain...
here we go...

K:

really nice story that was thrown in there and kept me hooked to read it, i wanted to find out wat had happened but at tha same time, tha story was confusin until tha very end, or rather half way through at least before i was gettin tha picture, which, by tha way, u did have real good imagery and i enjoyed that aspect, tha fact that u showed Quality as something that's both a virtue and can lead to a "tyrancy" as u put it was rather interestin... I would give u a 7.8 / 10 G/J

HC:

at first it had seemed like ur idea was missin tha sense of "Quality" but i soon found that i was wrong. after about tha first four lines i found wat it was u were explaining and how u explained it, not something i was expecting really but had a nice touch anyway, i really liked tha semi-"wordplay" u used as u broke up tha words and wat not (esp. tha gifted line) but to fully understand took a second reading, although tha first read still took ur breath away, overall a real nice touch to reflect Quality as something only people who deserve can get. 8.1 / 10 G/J

Winner: High Class

Both keep it up and improve, one's limit is even past heaven if u seek it...




PS: if ur wonderin y tha rating is like that, i made a program on my TI-83 that calculated a percentage than i divided that by ten... hey, it works....

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vote largo
his verse was good
and ending even better
something i wouldnt have thought about this subject
the imagery was good
first thought it was death but i see now it wasnt
good imagery does that shit to ya

high class:
his was more amusing simply
creativity, origionality wins in my views
ur vocab was fantasttic
and flow with the vocab was a great object to hold
and u held it througout yah peice
but in this case he won with creativity,origionality,and amusement

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We hang the petty thieves and appoint the great ones to public office
Aesop.

Well...

I'm kinda torn here...

Both of you threw some really good verses.

I was really swept up in Largo's story...
Great imagery, great fucking flow.
Wasn't thrilled with the ending, though.
I was liking being back in medevil times...
But I appreciate the twist you gave, nonetheless.
Vocab and originality are to be commended.

At first I was pretty put off by this verse.
The constant use of the same word, slightly altered...
Made me think there wasn't much effort put into this...
But then as I got half way through it or so...
I saw and understood why you were doing it...
And thought, "wow, that's pretty dope".
Good verse, real nice use of vocab, flow was pretty tight.

Still, for the originality, but mostly for the story included...

I gotta throw to Largo.

By a tiny fuckin margin.

Props to both.

Peace

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