Verses Due: Saturday, January 24th 2004
Voting Ends: Monday, January 26th 2004

Topic: Fenced In

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108533
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...533#post1123533
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...536#post1123536

g'luck...

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i'm not going to spend a lot of time on this really...
since it being a pre-season type of deal...
no more than 20 lines?

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Fenced In

Enclosure to my perjure over throws the urge to escape
While exposure to this space leaves my starry eyes draped
Four walls overhaul gravities magnitude to my thought
As pressure try’s to pull im merely schooled in this court
All dimensions inflicting pressure my area grows lesser
Pleasure sacrificed in this measure for worse or for better
My expressions unseen…light beams pierce the darkness
The compression screens my dreams of an esteemed vastness
Isolation breaking....the reason….contemplating freedom
But the compassion shaking my mind denies me a reason
The perimeter closing my chosen path is now obstructed
Left conducted by the aspersion that the guilty constructed
Leaving me caged…enslaved…rage engaged just ignored
And all motions displayed…….don’t penetrate the core
Amounting to nothing the controllers bluffing commands
Only spiritual toughness can maintain my sitting on my hands
The same blood stained corners grow warmer in times
Because my brain is in trauma and my eyes turning blind
Oxygen lessens my lungs stress and seize contemplating
Mind resting………………the fence begins replicating

Vote.. Theo Ginn for having a verse.

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