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05-09-04, 10:57 PM | #1 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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lman_1528 vs. dirtboy69
IP: 275E DC37
shit i did it again forgot to give someone a battle anyway your fighting me
deadlines: battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern check in by wedsday verses due by thrusday votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse bar limits: 4 bar min. 16 bar max.
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
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05-10-04, 06:58 PM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: 59A6 CBC9
checkin in..............
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05-11-04, 09:49 AM | #3 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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IP: 275E DC37
check i'll have my verse by the end of the day probably after i get back from work tonight
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
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05-11-04, 01:38 PM | #4 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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IP: 275E DC37
cut lman with my punches hittin like randomly done incisions//
tear this kid up i'm gettin handed all of the voters decisions// kid's feeling more pain then gettin surgery done without anesthetics// destory this little kid i don't care how it was that shadow predicts// constantly hiding in the dark your verse over shadowed by mine// when you left the league i was happy not having to read another line// in fact i think everyone was and you should take it as a fucking sign// even in the front lines you can't get votes pm'ing for them beggin// kid's only 13 saying he's gonna kill me, the whole idea is ridiculous// your lines senseless when they work it's cause there bitten it's obivous// nursery rhymes your shit's on level with elementary this guy's a novice// after this only seeing lamn_1528 in the sign out thread in the front office// waiting on you
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
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05-13-04, 11:32 PM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: 59A6 CBC9
I might only be 13 but an 8 year old could beat you//
you've been rhyming for 2 years and i still manage to defeat you// even shadow thinks i'm goin to win he might as well be a fortune teller cuz he predicted the win// your probubly enjecting some heroin cuz my punches are hittin harder than ever// even if only one of em hit you'ld be knocked out forever// even though i'm 13 i'm a convicted fellon in over 3 states// i've commited more homocides than you'll ever see, even if you live in New York state// you're probubly contumplating suicide because after this battle your record will be 5-7// and then you'll have to admit you can't rapbattle//
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05-13-04, 11:38 PM | #6 | ||||
Beyond Comprehention
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IP: 3D61 0C8E
Breakdown:
Punches: Dirt Metas: Neither Multies: Neither Wordplay: Neither Flow: Dirt Disses: Dirt Overall-Kinda Weak Battle.Neither Of The Two Had And Credible Complexity Or Punches But Dirt Takes This One.His Puns And Disses Get Him This One.Iman Came Too Weak.He Talked To Much In His Verse And Didnt Target His Opponent Enough.A Lot Of His Lines Were Fillers & The Rest Were Weak Punches.Some Lines Didnt Even Rhyme.Nice Try To Youngin.... Vote- DirtyBoy69
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05-14-04, 12:09 AM | #7 | |||||
retired.
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IP: 75F5 BDD1
Whoa wtf, I thought lman had some semblence of skill. I was wrong. Very wrong. Very, very wrong. Dirtboy wins, because his verse didn't start like this:
" I might only be 13 but an 8 year old could beat you// you've been rhyming for 2 years and i still manage to defeat you// even shadow thinks i'm goin to win he might as well be a fortune teller cuz he predicted the win//" His verse also rhymed for the most part and had punches. These are good things for a verse to have. Yours did not, lman.
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05-14-04, 01:02 PM | #8 | ||||
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: 4AD5 D18A
This was an obvious win for dirtboy.......no real need for a breakdown..
Vote - Dirtboy
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05-14-04, 05:13 PM | #9 | ||||
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
aight check it
dirtboy flow:7/10 wordusage:7/10 vocab:4/10 creativitie:5/10 punches:6/10 opener:6/10 closer:6/1 0verall:41/70 comment:dogg for a mod.you aint that good..i thought you would be..elevate on vocab..boring shit is well...boring fav/line:nothing lman: flow:6/10 wordusage:6/10 vocab:5/10 creativitie:6/10 punches:6/10 opener:5/10 closer:6/10 overall:40/70 comment:i liked urs coz for u coz ur shit was entertaining....but not enough fav/line:nothin v/dirtboy
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05-14-04, 06:07 PM | #10 | ||||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 59A6 CBC9
Quote:
yo i do got some skillz..... and this was one of my weakiest battles next week i will do betta........
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05-15-04, 06:19 AM | #11 | ||||
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IP: 7823 EEF2
dirtboy merked him but the other cat was wack, neither were great but dirts was way beta on this occasion...pz
v/dirt will ya hit up my battle wiv sten cell, not one vote yet n hot battle, honest vote, thanx
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05-15-04, 09:43 AM | #12 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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IP: 275E DC37
4-0 that last vote wasn't reallly explained looking to finish this
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
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05-16-04, 05:04 AM | #13 | ||||||
Street Royal-T
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IP: 08FE 4ABA
cut lman with my punches hittin like randomly done incisions//
tear this kid up i'm gettin handed all of the voters decisions// 6/10 kid's feeling more pain then gettin surgery done without anesthetics// destory this little kid i don't care how it was that shadow predicts// 8/10 good personal and punch constantly hiding in the dark your verse over shadowed by mine// when you left the league i was happy not having to read another line// 7/10 in fact i think everyone was and you should take it as a fucking sign// even in the front lines you can't get votes pm'ing for them beggin// 6/10 kid's only 13 saying he's gonna kill me, the whole idea is ridiculous// your lines senseless when they work it's cause there bitten it's obivous// 6.5/10 nursery rhymes your shit's on level with elementary this guy's a novice// after this only seeing lamn_1528 in the sign out thread in the front office// lol 9/10 nice structure solid drop I might only be 13 but an 8 year old could beat you// you've been rhyming for 2 years and i still manage to defeat you// hmmmmmm 3/10 even shadow thinks i'm goin to win he might as well be a fortune teller cuz he predicted the win// 2/10 not sure that rhymed your probubly enjecting some heroin cuz my punches are hittin harder than ever// even if only one of em hit you'ld be knocked out forever// 4/10 even though i'm 13 i'm a convicted fellon in over 3 states// i've commited more homocides than you'll ever see, even if you live in New York state// lol 4/10 you're probubly contumplating suicide because after this battle your record will be 5-7// and then you'll have to admit you can't rapbattle//huh 0/10 WHACK v/dirtboy
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05-16-04, 09:30 AM | #14 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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IP: 275E DC37
5-0 that's it i win this is closed
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
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