this was okay for an alright piece, this was a quite old read to be upped so no clue why this happened anyways...blaw decent read iguess...elevate on imagery however its much needed

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.. I Don't Believe It Need To Be Stated Yet : I Haven't Been On In A Good While That Is Where The 'Up' Came From Obviously ...

But Thanks For The Feedback...

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this was cool, decent vocabs and shit and overall quality delivery, but the imagery was average at best, it needs to be upped to a higher level to make the quality of the piece that much better.

and...

welcome back, i ain't seen you on in a long ass time, not since i made that freeposting thread we had

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And I Have Not The Slightest Idea Of Whom You Are...


Thanks For The Feedback Though Was Appricaited

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O_o....Back huh?.....

*Plays mace welcome back*.......

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mystery Is a Freak!!

ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private
ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged*

wow....damn i had to read dis 3 timez....lol......vocab n structure were both off da chain....da flow was hella good......damn ma.....nice job of reppin da femcees....plz leave some feed on my piece "Who Am I"....1

Thank........................................You

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