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11-14-04, 08:12 AM | #1 | ||||||
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"..Gore.."
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People Feel Repulsed By The Sickness Of My Imagination
I mean, Gore Provide's a answer in every Situation Make the Most of Anything that Come's To Hand Household Item Used as a Weapon, ain't so Bland If a Nigga Come up to you and Say's "Empty Ya Pocket's" Don't be Shook Reply "Ima Put a Banger In each of ya Eye Socket's" Incise Ya Side With Garden Plyer's & Wire ya Ball's up ta Cable Wire's Spill Hydrolhic acid on ya Skin and watch it spread Like a Forest Fire Rip ya Teeth out of ya Gum's and Clamp them on ya Testicle's Abduct ya Wifey and Operate On Her..Like we Extra-Terrestrial's Crack ya Fingernail's and Make ya Swallow Em Whole________ Release a Feast Of Petrol Drenched Locust's To Eat Ya Soul________ Stab Ya Knee Cap's With Rusty Blunt Butter Knife's Leave ya In a Blood Dipped Heap Laughing, while we Ride By So any of ya Fucka's Wanna Try and Challenge ..:Outbreak:.. Remember That Your gonna be another Victim to Rape.... I felt like Typing... |
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11-14-04, 09:53 AM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 2F3B A8C3
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11-14-04, 10:28 AM | #4 | |||||||
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Thank You....Herb... Upping for a Non-Herb to Give feedback...and Sinner just stop Rapping you Fag.. Or Battle Me... |
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11-14-04, 10:37 AM | #5 | ||||
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dont worry about sinner his accent on his audio is a piece of shit...
it was pretty good if it was your first written keep going, Incise Ya Side With Garden Plyer's & Wire ya Ball's up ta Cable Wire's Spill Hydrolhic acid on ya Skin and watch it spread Like a Forest Fire ^favorite bar of the verse...you got good vocab and complexity peace |
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11-14-04, 10:41 AM | #6 | ||||||
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Lol...I wanna Battle Sinner...
Thanx For The Feedback and it was a little freestyle... |
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11-14-04, 10:45 AM | #7 | ||||
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aight then it was good if it was a free, u new or this is jus an alias?
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11-14-04, 10:47 AM | #8 | ||||||
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IP: 2F3B A8C3
I'm New _____________You wanna Gore Battle?
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11-14-04, 11:18 AM | #9 | |||||
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son who wanna battle da kid
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11-14-04, 11:20 AM | #10 | |||||
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yo outbreak chill cuz i dont think ur dat nice bluffin n shit
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11-14-04, 11:28 AM | #11 | ||||
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^lol mercy hes better then you jus shh before you get your first loss....look at your rhymes...then look at his
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11-14-04, 02:24 PM | #12 | ||||||
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11-14-04, 04:35 PM | #13 | ||||||||
mess with me get cooked
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aiiiiiight its an ok "free"
da flow was messed up in some parts and u had some good vocab but dont try to stretch ya lines it's messing up da flow but anyway good vocab nice rhyme scheme i give u 7/10 work on da flow
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11-15-04, 01:52 PM | #14 | ||||
.Retro-Bution.
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11-15-04, 06:19 PM | #15 | ||||||
...Jea...
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goddamn your violent lol........it was cool drop some feed on mine....the declining of rap....good shit mayne.....7.5 or 8/10...kepp em cummin..........~1~
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