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*Troop* 5 62.50%
E Looch 3 37.50%
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Old 11-20-04, 11:51 PM   #1
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Voted For: *Troop*

E-Looch
put asteriks on ya name only way u be no.1 rv
see my name an u consumed in greed an ^ look wit no period is what u be
---wow...this was really badly worded...I get both wordplays but its not hard-hitting
small font fits u all ya lines aint really noticed or read
tryna shine off ya lyrics should just let ya s curl grease do it instead
---better but still meh
reasearch another disease shit wont work this week E endin ya streak
unoriginal every hour theres 3600 of u and u calim a.i.'s elite?
---doesnt flow well but much better than the two above it...pretty good punchwise
just try kidnapins its gonna be the only way u ever ran-som people
could own u bilingual puta...
...but slaverys illegal an yet still nobodys around u tryna mingle*
---second line streeeeeched...first line was a good setup but the punch fell off
life pass before your eyes when ya electricity blacks out
never a ridah just a hitchhika in a bus stop only time u in a glass house*
---flow blah...decent bar...

alright verse...you really didnt try hard at all and it shows...plus you explained punches booooooooo....definitely not your best work...



*Troop*

Hault to all Cornish Ambitions Testify to your Truths Please Mr E Looch
Ya "Financial Income" comes From Vaginal Devouring it should be E Mooch
---wack...3rd grade wordplay and barely makes sense...
Technique never Duplicated,Cus Pussified Thread Duckers isnt in Preference
Strobe Pm'd me with Rv's Best of All time Vets And Looch wasent in Reference
---did he really? because if you just made that up its wack...setup was pretty good...
Your Dna Cells Recognize your Falseness why is your BloodPressure187
Ya Perpetrateing Respected Veteran U look up 2 me like Ten Viewin Eleven
---pretty good wordplay...decent bar...
You Never Developed your Cash Collecting Tactics so your still on the Grind
Looch is never Heard Like Mimes No wonder hes a "Legend in his Own Mind"
---wording is kinda off but its ok...
One last Reminder stop with your Recycled Lyrics they are well Past Expirement
This Records as your 3rd Loss so Finally now you can go into Retirement
---meh...decent...


decent verse i guess...neither of you really tried at all...blah...troop you were a little less wack so I give it to you...
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