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11-19-04, 05:14 PM | #1 | ||||||
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IP: 5285 DC82
This is for those weak thought's dead like a bleak corpse. the seat brought a distort vision, but claiming number1 wasnt a thought decision. had a vision of a mad devision im glad they liven so now it's a provision obserd claim's of nerd's fame, while i toy with you herb's game so many alias's and account's you proberly on your 3rd name so many dont take responsibilty cant count the number of time's i have heard blame. I got my own style so you can label me a proviniance allway's down to help other's and give advice,so label me a conveniance cause rv hardly could harm me, my lyrical artilerly is full so dont try disarm me Im a soldier in the council army so be prepard for war. but let me remind you It's only lyric's..why you sitting there scard you whore?. I aint riding with you so why you talking about a takeover The only way you could do that is with a lyrical makover call me rv's saviour..cause im here with the spirtual rakeover ........................ yo let me get simple for all you small minded fuck's out there. Did you think I would just sit back and let you win. You never thought that going against me is a direct sin you next in line to try rec my mind,dont try inspect my kind cause we one of a type,You so fake I make fun of you hype talking crazy and claiming outrages thing's, take a closer look and see what our page's bring this is str8 keystyle so I wont even name this thing this is for the real but Im aware that the lame listening I belive in god,but never had a christening. my rhyme's stir more shit up than a tornado does. while your still amature,like you still on that playdoe buzz. ........ what muther fucker's. "fi-del" |
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11-19-04, 05:16 PM | #2 | |||
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IP: F2A1 41C4
hahaha i was feeling this.....
not a bad drop... 8.0 keep'em coming.... |
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11-19-04, 06:04 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 5285 DC82
thnx for the feed.
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11-19-04, 08:16 PM | #4 | |||||
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IP: 3240 794D
pretty nice... some lines were a little stretched but it was overall good, 7.5/10
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11-19-04, 09:45 PM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: 5285 DC82
thnx for the feed
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11-20-04, 04:28 AM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: 5285 DC82
up^^^feed will be repayed
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11-20-04, 04:29 AM | #7 | |||
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
ayo fam that was hot............
........some of the lines were a little streched out like the first couple........... ............u had a lot of multis in it which helped the flow............. .......ur vocab was pretty good too............... |
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11-20-04, 10:59 AM | #8 | ||||
FuCk YoU I RhYme BeTtEr
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yo man...i was feelin this...tight shit...your first few lines were a lil bit streched, could minimize that a lil bit...the rest of it, flowed well...good vocab, multies...which helped with the flow a whole lot...nice drop fam...8/10...keep them coming
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11-20-04, 11:40 AM | #9 | |||||
Puttin MD On The Map
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IP: 408D D2A2
nice drop fi-del i expect nothing less since i know ur skill this was full of vocab and flow was pretty nice man keep it up.....and stretched lines aint shit when its an OM....
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11-20-04, 03:08 PM | #10 | ||||||
...Jea...
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IP: 3240 794D
liked it 7.5 or 8/10......some of the lines was stretched .....good flow vocab and concept....keep droopin em'
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11-20-04, 07:47 PM | #11 | ||||||
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IP: 5285 DC82
thnx for the feed,
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