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Old 09-30-05, 06:38 AM   #1
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Gun Check ft. Young T
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A track me and my boy did a few months back.
its all good, I go first then he goes
also, at the end of my verse, and in the beginning there's feedback or some shit, I DONT KNOW HOW THE FUCK I GOT FEEDBACK!
But iuts not horrible, I promise
check it-check-it-check it out
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If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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Old 09-30-05, 06:48 AM   #2
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If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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Old 09-30-05, 10:39 AM   #3
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*listening*


Intro cool, Im feelin the beat... JUELZ!

Kinda bad quality on the whole song, like beat and vocals... not sure what thats about...

Your flow is pretty on point, lyrics decent... for some reason the hook sounds really bad though...

Second verse - much better quality, really nice flow...


Overall decent track.
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Old 09-30-05, 08:34 PM   #4
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beat is dope word.....your flows cool.....damn quality really holdin you back...emotion is gud word best i heard all day today lol....i like your flow lol anyways hit me up for a collab or sumthin...word
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Old 09-30-05, 11:13 PM   #5
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lol, people keep sayin our quality is different, I dont know how..
Young T is a nigga in my NEIGHBORHOOD!
He came over my house and we used the same mic and everything.
so.....blah
anyway, thanks for all the feedback...
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If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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Old 10-01-05, 02:43 AM   #6
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Word, your flow pretty decent... lyrics straight... the chorus sound weird cus it sound like this whole track was in one take. I love this beat... Not bad at all... The quality just messes wit the track somewhat other than that, decent.

-The quality don't sound different between the two of you, it just sound like you recorded, and did no engineering to your vocals but lined up the vocals and uploaded it.
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Old 10-01-05, 02:49 AM   #7
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wow
lmfao
you hit it right on the nose
thats all I seriously did
This track is kinda old, so it was kinda before I really got the hang of CEP2
Thanks for the FB, LF
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If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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Old 10-01-05, 02:52 AM   #8
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Flow is decent, on the hook some parts are a lil off when they say "1, 2". Young T could've prolly paced himself and it would've sounded better, instead some of the lines seem a lil rushed. Maybe use some punch ins. Decent track, quality hurts it a lil, but it's not that bad.
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lol... well if you need any help with engineering on CE, hit me up on AIM.
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If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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Old 10-03-05, 03:02 PM   #11
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^What that sexy dope ass nigga said..
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If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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Old 10-10-05, 09:20 AM   #13
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Kryo?

ur a fuckin moron...and a closet case


beat is good though

ur mic is shitty quality...ur screaming...and there's distortion

ur flow is fine

rhyming is cool

Jay Z like rhyming


not bad

not great = ehhh



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