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Old 03-27-06, 09:38 AM   #1
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Young Jew (Aint Ready to Rumble) *diss!!!!*

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"Young Jew (Aint Ready to Rumble)"
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Old 03-27-06, 09:39 AM   #2
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Old 03-27-06, 09:44 AM   #3
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fix ya link, man...lol
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Old 03-27-06, 10:03 AM   #4
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word 2 my appearence

dope shit...
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Old 03-27-06, 10:11 AM   #5
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yo.... unf .... ya got ya hands full with this one man....

beat was nice... actually liked ya flow on this... real convincing... lots of conviction and confidence in ya voice....lots of play on the young jew thing... one thing ya need to do is adjust ya levels... ya main vocals are kinda low and ya back up vocals are way too high... aside from that it was a pretty solid diss... lots of breaks in between the verses... more hook woulda been nice instead of the talking... in a way it was still kinda effective... and lay off the "bitch" werd a lil bit... it was overdone... other than that... i enjoyed when you were actually rhyming... easy
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Old 03-27-06, 11:44 AM   #6
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Listening, lol why you mentioning me??...flow is nice, pretty hot, lyrics are good, you got a real nice cocky swager which I enjoy, beat is hot, lol why me again???..haha..lool the hook is prety nice, this was more enjoyable, better punches, n funnier: ps. I dont have beef with UNF, I just said that his diss was weak and i wanted him to improve and yes I areed ure nicer....okay

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Humour: MK
Flow: MK
Delivery: Tied
Emotion: Tied
Lyrics: MK
Articulation: MK

MK won this hands down...first off he had a better beat choice, abetter flow cos I can hear what hes saying thas ya main prolem UNF, you pack too many words in, and MK ure ish was pretty nice, you did come back at him pretty strong n pretty much ended it...1
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Old 03-27-06, 12:10 PM   #7
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Old 03-27-06, 12:16 PM   #8
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lmao... unf= ripped

good shit mk.

flows inproved loads man, emotion and delivery are on point... your levels are a bit low though..

some of ya punches were koool....

ur quality is sick man that the usb mic fing?

raaz this is on for tiiimee mate. im feelin this man u killed him. end of.

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Old 03-27-06, 01:38 PM   #9
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thanx for the feed

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Old 03-27-06, 02:51 PM   #10
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UNF got fucking destroyed in this

Up your vocals bro, too quiet. flows solid as fuck, emotions dope, lyrics are solid, On the real, your too underated bro, one of the best UK cats on the site, if not the best, your voice is original as fuck,were as alot of the UK heads sound similier.

UNF got ripped, simple as that, for some reason your tracks hype me up. You know what time it is. Bliiiiiiittt!
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Old 03-27-06, 04:41 PM   #11
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its hard to understand what your saying....cause your vocals were poorly mixed in...so thats takes away tons from how hard hitting the diss is....if the vocals were at the right level...it woulda been tons better.......

other than that...not bad...your delivery and eveyrthing has improved...just gotta get those vocals straight...thats my only problem with it..

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Old 03-28-06, 10:25 AM   #12
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Old 03-29-06, 01:00 PM   #13
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tha beat is kinda wierd
I kinda liked the lyrics
flow is on point
quality is ...hmm..
only thing I didn't like was your UK accent,but you cant get rid of that
so thats all gd
dope diss
unf = ripped

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Old 03-29-06, 03:23 PM   #14
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yea its aight man pretty even battle scott at times i dont understand what ur saying doesn t mean its bad i just dont necessarily understand it.............hook shuda been left out ...overall good shit for not just lettin em trash you but yall shud take this to battle forums!holla
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