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06-25-06, 01:30 AM | #16 | ||||
Ike
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IP: F5EA AA2D
thanks................uppin to the top...leave links and ill rtf
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06-25-06, 01:54 AM | #17 | |||
The Rise
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IP: AEB3 C728
all i gotta say its pretty dope even though its not my style.
lol on last verse when you said something about you loved your son and he died or something like that, i was like ike is gay lol but then i got it. dope shit keep it up bruv. ~1~ |
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06-25-06, 02:47 PM | #18 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 6652 1D7C
Listenin', im really feelin beats like this...drums are owning this beat crazy...intro is real nice...damn "heaven was a blurry vision", flow is dope here fam..and delivery fits the track..u can tell you spent time on this...DAMN this hook is crazy...lyrically this song is amazing..production is fine..vocal levels are all fine...and I liked how you used the sample too..damn..multis during this makes the track hot too...Hook is dpe...fam this is definitely an amazing track another one of the best on rv, Ive just heard yours and Tha Q's track and im blown away..emotion is gr8 all the way thru..and im lovin the end...the story bout the child..."room surrounded by death was now clowded by life"...10/10 - 2nd ive given in a day damn
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06-25-06, 03:01 PM | #19 | |||||||
Better THAN You!
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IP: 5E52 57E4
WHOA......
i mean wow...damn..lol im loving it... The beginning seems a little off when your talkin but it picks up and then when you start your verse..i was like WOW...this is a great topical track... hook is B-A-N-A-N-A-S...holy ish..can't even..damn.. second verse kinda died down in the tone and emotion but not in the feel of the song...it was still a great verse man.. hook is still bananas lol.... third verse emotion picked up a little more and the content is still crazy, holy fuck at that ender..................... *Downloads this* Thanks for a great song..
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06-25-06, 03:03 PM | #20 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: 2B7A 2084
What's hot:
beat is good flow is good lyrics are well thought out hook flew by...so I missed it the first time...but it's good. What's not: intro is too long...get to the point I'm still not buying your delivery, what others call "emotion" I call whining on track and it's annoying to me...It's not bad...but, it's mostly because your voice is still finding it's place...i.e., puberty Your flow becomes repetitive after the 1st verse and I lost interest. Overall: it's a good track, but not the best I've heard on RV by a long shot. Keep em rollin. **yea, same beat LE used for something... |
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06-26-06, 06:18 PM | #21 | ||||||
...Closer Look...
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IP: 0C5E D106
listening...
beat is cool....i like it cos it a type dat wud get u to reflect u know,you sound like u forcing ur words i.e u pushing ur breathe or w/e too much..sounds like u forcing to get the emotion i feel it shud come spontaneously get me?...and as for the hook?...i like it very nice..no too much words or too much yelling and stuff..dats a nice touch there...well apart from ur forced voice and stuff,the topic was nice...yeah clare and nice wording and stuff...i liked it...quality is tight!...better than mine ...lol nah u gd dawg just dat u forced u wording out...idk if u get me...w/e... overall...nice kinna got me reflecting and stuff too
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06-28-06, 01:13 PM | #22 | |||||||
I see dumb people
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IP: D8D0 13C1
aiight, peepin...
beat is pretty nice. likin' it first verse is coo. Nice lil flow on this. Dope ass emotion, and as usual you bring the heat with the lyrics. so overall a tight lil verse. not much more to sayt hook is nice. is pretty catchy. so props to that. second verse, seems like you upped the emotion from first verse on this one. good flow, delivery. lyrics tight as usual. fire verse. good shittt hook again third verse, flows there, lyrics. a nice verse again overall, i liked this track a lot man. good shit. flow was there, lyrics. dope ass feel to it. I might have not said much feedback wise, but honestly, really couldn't find anything to critique on. you came pretty tight on this. good shit. 9/10 stay up RTF plz: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230662 EZ
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06-29-06, 01:27 AM | #23 | |||||||
Better THAN You!
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IP: 63DA E3A8
Yo...ike can you rtf on my song "Dear Lord" down the page..please..lol
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07-02-06, 07:11 PM | #24 | ||||||
Light Weight
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DAMN! Ike you snapped, this is one of the illest tracks in RV history. Fa real, you outdid yoself on this one. It's rare to find me givin feedback just to give it n' not to use for a link, but I had to come through n tell you good f'in job.
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07-02-06, 10:09 PM | #25 | |||||
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wow...
i keep being more and more impressed everytime you put out a new track Ike... this track = one of my favorite storytelling tracks PERDIOD, not just on RV... you keep comin on point man, i think you gotta be at the top of RV's audio heads... the hook is crazzzzy hot, and the verses accent it perfectly, nice track overall...
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07-02-06, 11:52 PM | #26 | ||||
I Smacc Booty Emcee's
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man, this track is hot. straight up. the beats not my type. but i got used to it going into the track. i like the guitars on this though. And the concept on this track is fuckin serious yo, this is something i'd rock while i'm laying down. But the flow is nice on this. rides the beat nice. the thing that stands out in this track is your pressence and the emotion. Damn this track has you thinkin on the last verse too. this shit is HOT. keep doin what you do 9.6/10
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07-04-06, 01:43 AM | #27 | ||||
Ike
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IP: F5EA AA2D
word...i was out in st louis last few days..so i havent got a chance to respond...thanks for the feed everyone.......270 something views?...umm...i gotta up till its atleast 300 people...cmon now
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