the first day i woke my life was ready to be choked
and now i feel smoked really wish i never awoke
growin up dis way i never thought this could be me
you could never understand what kind of things i see
cuz all i see is an empty world and go from day 2 day
wish we could all fuck away instead of livin afraid
and it's 2 bad we got families we know we cant relie on
dont be fooled by em der my enemies i cant take sight off
wot do u do when the fuckers wont even let you be
do u understand wot ur doin ur makin me wanna leave
but leave for good cuz i feel misunderstood
u really stood on me id kill u if i really could
but is it worth it bitch u peope look down on me like im worthless
but when u take a hard look at urself why u think u got a purpous
cuz we're all the same the weaker ones dont speak a word
we just dont give a fuck we just pretend we never heard

thats really deep.. i like this peace... it was good...shows alot of troubles u have or had now and in ur past... first 4 lines were dope. very impacting and creative.... to my eyes anyways. i say u make ur pieces longer... ive noticed u make them only 16 lines. well make 48 lines and kick in a chorus... be a little better.. i look at this as only the tip of the ice berge of what u really want to say and express... keep it up hommes. pretty dope shit..

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Technique, this was a descent drop. I did not really see any clever word usage or anything that stood out from the other drops, but you remained on topic very well and did a good job with the deliverance of this passage.

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