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07-16-03, 03:21 PM
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"I Can't see the Ligh'..." - A True Story
IP: 826C 4C70
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I can't see the end of the tunnel// The path Ima takin is a downwards funnel// Niggaz hate me, bitches hate me...// Ma own parents despise of me...// What futa can I see...?// [Verse 1] Sometimes I feel like I'm hated// When I do shi', I'm not appreciated// I've done everythin' I could possibly do// I've wrote I book, nobody's prouda me, what'd I prove?// I'm treated like dirt on the groun'// When a bitch turns me down I get down// What I go through everyday, is eternal sorrow// It's alo' like I don' want ta see tomorrow// Even ma so called 'best friend' hates me// Only thin' I seem ta live fo is bein' accepted inta the N.Y.G// But, is that really worth livin' fo, a crew on RB?// I'm I jus' fuckin' messed-up physically an' mentally?// The en' of the tunnel, I can' see...// [Chorusx2] [Verse 2] Why have I been put on dis Earth..?// Why have I been put on dis rock of hurt..?// Is it some curse that I've been cursed wit?// That I have to put up wit dis fuckin' shi'?// I would give ANYTHIN' to be a happy soul...// BUt I can't see how, jus' through me and bury me in a whole...// I'm gettin' frustrated now...I can't see the light...// I pray every night:// "Lord, oh Lord! I'm done a'ight..?"// [Chorusx3] Yo, dis is true dawgz...feedback is great... |
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07-16-03, 03:51 PM
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IP: 826C 4C70
UPPIN'^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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07-16-03, 04:04 PM
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IP: DB8F 0017
you should be happy wit this gangsta1...it was nice.....................
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07-16-03, 07:02 PM
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IP: 826C 4C70
Yo, dawg thx....uppin' fo some mo feedback........................
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07-17-03, 06:20 AM
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IP: 8AA4 C75D
emotional drop man...i was feelin it...but it'd didnt seem to end...maybe one more verse an it'd be striaght clean a 10 out'a 10 for real keep spittin man i liked it though it was tight im uppen
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07-17-03, 01:57 PM
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IP: 5CC1 C246
Yo, thx fo da feedback. Maybe a lil' mo dawgz?
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07-17-03, 02:57 PM
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IP: E7CB E3DC
that drop was deep i was feelin it
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07-17-03, 03:07 PM
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IP: 5CC1 C246
A'ight thx dawg.......UPPIN'^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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