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Old 08-09-03, 07:17 PM   #1
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PURE ILLNESS!! K-Skandaluz - Hurry Up

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Yo this track is PURE ILLNESS. Y'all will miss out if you don't peep this track. It's called "Hurry Up"

Lo-Fi: http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=500048&q=Lo

Hi-Fi: http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=500048&q=Hi


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Old 08-09-03, 08:49 PM   #2
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This shit is hot bro..nice flow..delivery..quality..etc.. all good peace
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Old 08-10-03, 04:49 AM   #3
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Your Flow Is Straight, Bit Choppy In Some Parts...Delivery Is Nice...Lyrics Are Ok...You Sound Canadian Uh...Are You?...Anyway Yeah This Was Pretty Nice...Stay Up...Pz...
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Old 08-10-03, 11:49 PM   #4
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Thanx fam. Anymore feedback?
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Old 08-12-03, 08:36 AM   #5
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Uppin for more feedback. BTW, no I ain't Canadian. LMAO
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Old 08-12-03, 01:51 PM   #6
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hrm sounds coo. pretty nice actually

things that may help:

1. Phrasing - This is a big problem i see on rb. You may have a dope line but try switching around the words to make it more hard hitting

2. Voice - Pretty good emotion but in the beginning and throughout some parts u stressed your voice. It makes u sound weak. The average person may not catch it.... i dont know but thats my opinion

~thier was some otha stuff but forget it this was pretty hot. keep it up.
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