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Avalon 5 83.33%
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Old 10-11-03, 04:36 PM   #1
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Avalon vs 13th Disciple

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okay...

32 max...
drop by midnight..eastern time
no feeding
blah blah blah
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Old 10-11-03, 07:48 PM   #2
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aiight.....lets do this.....good luck





came 2 the point of being more than played, u just all out boring
ur garbage...and i'll let the trashman take u out in the morning
lyrics soaring...no need to hype it up make claims wit my boasts
cuz while i'm droppin bars Avalon competes by droppin freeposts
talent is ghost, never existed, peeped ur recent battles u wrote
shit, i'd cut this dick in half & let him know the balls in my court
time 2 abort,challengin the champ?!,postin up is simply irrelevance
Av said i'm soft...so i emailed him my dick for hard evidence.....
no sense, how can ur ship sail when my flows has it already sinkin
& i'll force u to give me brains.......just to fuck what ur thinking
drown ur alias Island, ironic 13th Disciple, yet puttin u thru Hell
throw a lit Optimo blunt at u cuz u bout to feel the burn of an 'L'
off u fell, but i'm still standin,rip ur jaw off so how can u spit?...
gettin ass fuck'd in the mirror is how Av watches who he beefs wit
u ain't sick, i'm poppin more CAPS than Shady's mom takin pills..
its my fate to drop lead on this kid...so u can say u got Iron-Will
chill, return ur karoeke machine back, cuz Av u just can't rap...
matter of fact, i'll just Knockout this child & leave this Kid-Napped
*slap*, got u sayin my name in vain cuz u already sayin GodDamn
Av's a fake thug, like a blood wearin a confederate headband..
man, i got children of my own thats why i hate 2 spank this kid
NWA said 'Fuck The Police'....thats why i'm slaughtering this pig
split wig, wit ur amputated fists u ain't connectin wit ur hits...
i'm tearin u a new asshole....cuz 13th Disciple is known to rip shit
knight bit, peep his site,u'll have a better chance winnin the battle
cuz i'll fuck u at Eve....then turn around & eat ur Adams apple....
u can't grapple, i suggest walk away wit ur neck still intact...
u so weak...i'm keyin this verse to a country musical track....
wack!...like failed suicidal attempts kid u ain't makin this cut....
and therez one thing worser than ur punches...u showin up...
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Old 10-11-03, 08:03 PM   #3
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All I can say is I hope that Avalon drops a strong verse!

Good luck 2 bof

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Old 10-11-03, 08:09 PM   #4
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Fareal dog..?


*clears throat*



Av's rippin you natives... killin deciples till they can't come back,
Cause ya verse last week was hot & original... till I read Camarac's...
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13th's jokes only... and kids... it's not hard to down him,
check his roster, only question is why clown...? When they all around him...
look at his verse people... after mine... it'll be hard to salvage it,
cause it's all ass... dick... like where's Mike's was and Kalvin's is...
as a note fuck 13th... ya boring... and ya name sucks,
forget fresh concepts... that bitch can't even think of a played punch...
and stay cunt when Av's tearin you up... your win is a doubt in mind,
ya punches misbehave... the way they stepped out of line...
Av's known to harass... cuss and then stomp out,
opponents with a wack rhyme scheme... but you only have the font now...
N for those thinkin I can't do it, I'm showin ya wrongly doubted,
Av's fillin Diciples up with more clips than a staples outlet...
Coolie you're only scum, never said one thing considered amazin,
who's name resembles his punches more than The End... of civilization..?
You oughtta know... Homey, I author bludgeons
Beatin me's easy like emptyin a tub wit a teaspoon... while the waters runnin...
ur fam sent me here... tryin to get a message thru
u a problem child Coolie... they had a prob to get rid of you...
speakin of crews I'm combustible... see the chemical forming,
13ths' the back burner, Av' "head of the pack" like surgeon general warnings...
I saw Regime's roster.... only sheep fuckers allowed in the crew,
cause believe it or not... they're the only ones that are feelin ewe...
You misplaced your flow..? but 13th you had none,
thought I'd give you your first loss... same one there's 23 sequels of..!
I'll claim the prize... seriously that's just something winners get,
while you sit in a wet suit... happy... to be surfing the internet...
face it, I'ma be ya idol pops till ya heart and vitals stop,
proud to be 3-0 in a league where Taktik got a title shot..?
& whats funny, is you act like we wouldnt go on without joo
I'd include an IM quote for proof... but... noone talks about you...





and I'm done...
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Old 10-11-03, 08:13 PM   #5
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Damn...

This was ill...

13th came nice...
Great punches... not many personals.. but you wanted that...
You misplaced your flow..? but 13th you had none,
thought I'd give you your first loss... same one there's 23 sequels of..!
& whats funny, is you act like we wouldnt go on without joo
I'd include an IM quote for proof... but... noone talks about you...


Those two bars took it for Av.

Av came with nice wordplay as always and went personal...

Hmm... tied on flow...

I think I'll have to vote Av. however...
In the closest of battles...
 
Old 10-12-03, 03:33 AM   #6
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yes...this was definately a good battle...uppin this thing yall.......
don't won't it to hit the bottom......................up.................... ......
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Old 10-12-03, 01:57 PM   #7
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yes...this was definately a good battle...uppin this thing yall.......
don't won't it to hit the bottom......................up.................... ......
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Old 10-12-03, 04:48 PM   #8
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Damn this was truely an ill battle................could be a Legend piece..........

13 Disciple

Very good verse........you had many hard punches...........many that i went oooo and ahhh at..........then there was some that i went huh? The problem you had was stayin consistent........as there was some lines i jus wasnt feelin............you had good flow and good wordplay..............but overall it was a nice verse

13th's Quotables - 42/50

time 2 abort,challengin the champ?!,postin up is simply irrelevance
Av said i'm soft...so i emailed him my dick for hard evidence.....

lyrics soaring...no need to hype it up make claims wit my boasts
cuz while i'm droppin bars Avalon competes by droppin freeposts

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Avalon

Very nice verse as well..........some nice personals.......and very nice punches.......you were better with consistency, altho your verse had its faults...........you and 13th were fairly even with flow, wordplay and personals..........but you took punches

AV's Quotables - 46/50

13th's jokes only... and kids... it's not hard to down him,
check his roster, only question is why clown...? When they all around him...

speakin of crews I'm combustible... see the chemical forming,
13ths' the back burner, Av' "head of the pack" like surgeon general warnings...

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Breakdown

Punches - Avalon(more consistent)
Personals - Even
Flow - Even
Wordplay - Even
Structure - 13th

Overal Vote: Avalon
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Old 10-12-03, 04:53 PM   #9
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came 2 the point of being more than played, u just all out boring
ur garbage...and i'll let the trashman take u out in the morning
Nice Opener

lyrics soaring...no need to hype it up make claims wit my boasts
cuz while i'm droppin bars Avalon competes by droppin freeposts
Fresh Personal

talent is ghost, never existed, peeped ur recent battles u wrote
shit, i'd cut this dick in half & let him know the balls in my court
Wordplay Was Pretty Hard

time 2 abort,challengin the champ?!,postin up is simply irrelevance
Av said i'm soft...so i emailed him my dick for hard evidence.....
Sorta Played But Was Tight

no sense, how can ur ship sail when my flows has it already sinkin
& i'll force u to give me brains.......just to fuck what ur thinking
Nice Hard Punch

drown ur alias Island, ironic 13th Disciple, yet puttin u thru Hell
throw a lit Optimo blunt at u cuz u bout to feel the burn of an 'L'
Straight Up... Sorta Choppy

off u fell, but i'm still standin,rip ur jaw off so how can u spit?...
gettin ass fuck'd in the mirror is how Av watches who he beefs wit
Damn.......ILL Personal

u ain't sick, i'm poppin more CAPS than Shady's mom takin pills..
its my fate to drop lead on this kid...so u can say u got Iron-Will
Got Me Shook....In Confusion

chill, return ur karoeke machine back, cuz Av u just can't rap...
matter of fact, i'll just Knockout this child & leave this Kid-Napped
LOL......Good Diss

*slap*, got u sayin my name in vain cuz u already sayin GodDamn
Av's a fake thug, like a blood wearin a confederate headband..
Wordplay Is 13th's Specialty

man, i got children of my own thats why i hate 2 spank this kid
NWA said 'Fuck The Police'....thats why i'm slaughtering this pig
LOL That SongWas Tight

split wig, wit ur amputated fists u ain't connectin wit ur hits...
i'm tearin u a new asshole....cuz 13th Disciple is known to rip shit
*GIGGLES* 13th Hilarous With Punches And Wordplay

knight bit, peep his site,u'll have a better chance winnin the battle
cuz i'll fuck u at Eve....then turn around & eat ur Adams apple....
AHH Metnal Pictures Not Good

u can't grapple, i suggest walk away wit ur neck still intact...
u so weak...i'm keyin this verse to a country musical track....
Damn Thats Pretty Weak... If You Can Blaze To Country

wack!...like failed suicidal attempts kid u ain't makin this cut....
and therez one thing worser than ur punches...u showin up...

LOL Damn.... Good Hard Punches..Nice Wordplay

Overall 13th Did Aight
I Say 86.5/100




13th's jokes only... and kids... it's not hard to down him,
check his roster, only question is why clown...? When they all around him...
Personal Was Tight...

look at his verse people... after mine... it'll be hard to salvage it,
cause it's all ass... dick... like where's Mike's was and Kalvin's is...
Got Me Confused

as a note fuck 13th... ya boring... and ya name sucks,
forget fresh concepts... that bitch can't even think of a played punch...
Um......Sorta Simple

and stay cunt when Av's tearin you up... your win is a doubt in mind,
ya punches misbehave... the way they stepped out of line...
Nice Punch And Wordplay

Av's known to harass... cuss and then stomp out,
opponents with a wack rhyme scheme... but you only have the font now...
LOL

N for those thinkin I can't do it, I'm showin ya wrongly doubted,
Av's fillin Diciples up with more clips than a staples outlet...
Damn...You Fuckin His Ass Up Then

Coolie you're only scum, never said one thing considered amazin,
who's name resembles his punches more than The End... of civilization..?
? Is Right

You oughtta know... Homey, I author bludgeons
Beatin me's easy like emptyin a tub wit a teaspoon... while the waters runnin...
What An Imagination...That'd Take Forever

ur fam sent me here... tryin to get a message thru
u a problem child Coolie... they had a prob to get rid of you...
Personal Crazy

speakin of crews I'm combustible... see the chemical forming,
13ths' the back burner, Av' "head of the pack" like surgeon general warnings...
Nice

I saw Regime's roster.... only sheep fuckers allowed in the crew,
cause believe it or not... they're the only ones that are feelin ewe...
Not Great Bar

You misplaced your flow..? but 13th you had none,
thought I'd give you your first loss... same one there's 23 sequels of..!
Damn............

I'll claim the prize... seriously that's just something winners get,
while you sit in a wet suit... happy... to be surfing the internet...
LOL Nice Wordplay And Punch

face it, I'ma be ya idol pops till ya heart and vitals stop,
proud to be 3-0 in a league where Taktik got a title shot..?
Nice Flow, Multies, And Wordplay

& whats funny, is you act like we wouldnt go on without joo
I'd include an IM quote for proof... but... noone talks about you...

Damn...Nice Finisher
Avalons Shit Was Tight
Got Alot Of Confusin Punches
But They Was Tight
Overall- 86.3/100


Final Vote=13th Disciple
I Simple Thought He Came Harder
With Wordplay, And Punches
But DAMN
This Battle Was Close As Hell
Props To Ya Both
No Hate AV
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Old 10-12-03, 04:58 PM   #10
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Wow... Nice Battle Kids... Was Actually Worth The Time... 13 Had Witty Punches... But All The Times He Said He'll Do Somethin Or Is Goin To Do Something... Really Took Away From The Quality Of It And Got Old Quick. Av Had This Down With Punches And Personals... So I Gotta Throw This To Him... Good Drops From Both Though.

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Old 10-12-03, 05:28 PM   #11
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Breakdown

Personals=Avalon
Punches=13th Disciple
Multis=Avalon
Wordplay=Avalon
Complexity=13th Disciple
Creativity=Avalon
Structure=13th Disciple
Vocabulary=Avalon

Overall=Avalon

Favorite Line By Avalon:
speakin of crews I'm combustible... see the chemical forming,
13th's' the back burner, Av' "head of the pack" like surgeon general warnings...

....................That was some ill shit...................that line edged it
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Favorite line by 13th Disciple:
time 2 abort,challengin the champ?!,postin up is simply irrelvance
Av said I'm soft...so I emailed him my dick for hard evidence.....

...............................That should have put him in check...................

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Vote: Avalon

GOOD SHIT HOMIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 10-12-03, 05:56 PM   #12
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Old 10-12-03, 06:46 PM   #13
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Damn
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I Honestly Thought 13th Took It
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But Idk
It Was Really Fuckin Close
But Ya'll Seem To Think
Avalon Won
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Old 10-12-03, 06:59 PM   #14
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^Kid you barely got my lines... for one thing... if you don't get it... why vote..? God... you're a idiot...


























Not sayin shit about the vote... but you are an idiot...
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Old 10-12-03, 10:18 PM   #15
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yea i agree with everyone else.......

i think Av got this one......this was a........

real fuckin classic battle......props to u 13th........

2 of the dopest heads on this site.........

but yeah...Av took this with a more consistent verse........

a little bit of better flow.....killer punches....and......

killer personals.....13th u had a decent solid verse also........

but it lacked just a little bit....and it just......

wasn't enough to take Av's verse.......

good battle...no hate...much respect......but

my vote goes to [b]AVALON[B]........

good battle...stay up...

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