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11-18-03, 09:28 AM | #1 | ||||||
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N LitEnd VS Bribeone1
IP: D79C 2834
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11-18-03, 11:30 AM | #2 | |||||||
ShO-Nuff. Fuckers
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IP: 399E F0FD
Will give a fuck.
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11-18-03, 02:36 PM | #3 | ||||
^ Says It All ^
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IP: 024D 7BE9
Hi Bribe..
I Will Match You.. Good Luck..
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11-20-03, 10:39 AM | #4 | |||||||
ShO-Nuff. Fuckers
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IP: 4577 CD9A
I punch heads off, so u come to me seeking en light ment.
receive me with an open mouth, and its not cause u are frightened. ya pulse is heightened, cause bribes' increasing ya blood flow. I'm why ure face hurts, dragging u head first through the mud slow. a poor soul, destined to be a no body forever flirt cause u love my wize ass, and its not cause I am clever. I'll shoot at the whites of ya eyes when they come into view I'll toy with this kid more than once, like a jackson dejavu right on cue witt no remorse i make a cut at the scene. Leave u swimming witt fishes,. so your aquatic talent could be seen.
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11-21-03, 12:36 PM | #5 | ||||
^ Says It All ^
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IP: 5D0F C18E
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11-21-03, 01:17 PM | #6 | ||||
Middle Weight
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IP: 9DAE 3ADA
I punch heads off, so u come to me seeking en light ment.
receive me with an open mouth, and its not cause u are frightened. ^1st punch blah, 2nd punch was funny but could have been worded better. ya pulse is heightened, cause bribes' increasing ya blood flow. I'm why ure face hurts, dragging u head first through the mud slow. ^Weak punch. a poor soul, destined to be a no body forever flirt cause u love my wize ass, and its not cause I am clever. ^Second line blah, but I liked the first, lol. I'll shoot at the whites of ya eyes when they come into view I'll toy with this kid more than once, like a jackson dejavu ^1st line was eh...second line was poorly worded. right on cue witt no remorse i make a cut at the scene. Leave u swimming witt fishes,. so your aquatic talent could be seen. ^1st line had good wordplay, weak punch. 2nd was blah. Poor closer. “Fuck A Bribe”, Everytime That’s Mentioned B Is There Ready And Waitin Misundastood Child, Bribes Scared Of Confrontation <--- He’s Already Faintin! ^1st line was kinda okay...good flow in second line... I Spit Abrasive Scars…U Put Ya Heart In The Game, Here’s A Fact: Look, U Got Less Chance Of Getting Signed Than A Retarded Kids Yearbook!! ^lol The Doubts Gone…And You Know The Shadow Is Lurkin In Front Of Bribe! Left Heads Turned Like The Tide…While I Bribe one & 1 To Run And Hide!! ^okay NoW bRiBe, WrItE LiKe ThIs, Coz Its Played & A Bitch To Read, Like Ya Verse! Here’s A Quick Question...”Ya Looks…Or Ya Skills…Tell Me Whats Worse?!” ^okay.. Basically Bribe, You Cant Escape This Coz The Win Is In My Eye Sight And If Ya Wonderin Why This Verse Is A Link… …Coz When It Comes To It…Everything Of Mine Is A High Light!! ^Weak closer...last line was same as Token's...you had to create something just to make it work...blah. Close battle. N definitely took the flow...there's no doubt about that. Wordplay was pretty even...Bribe's was more effective if you ask me. Punches..I'm gonna have to go with N on the punches. Not by much though... If Bribe could word his lines better, he could be a dangerous opponent. Decent battle.. Vote ~ N |
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11-21-03, 02:45 PM | #7 | ||||||
Yep. . .
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IP: B7CF A136
Bribe Had Too Many "Ehhh Nearly" Lines...Some Punches Were Weak And Some Were Dope...But They Needed Re-Wording...
~N Came With Some Funny Ass Disses...Decent Flow...But The Link Thing Was Kinda Gay..Didnt Feel That At All... Stand Out Lines From Bribe: a poor soul, destined to be a no body forever I'll toy with this kid more than once, like a jackson dejavu Stand Out Lines From ~N: U Got Less Chance Of Getting Signed Than A Retarded Kids Yearbook!! “Fuck A Bribe”, Everytime That’s Mentioned B Is There Ready And Waitin Misundastood Child, Bribes Scared Of Confrontation <--- He’s Already Faintin! Pretty Close Battle...Like Leth Said..N Took Flow... But Overall My Vote Goes To ~N Because I Felt His Punches A Bit More...Bribe Has Some Killer Puns That Could've Killed ~N But They Were Poorly Worded...So I Vote For ~N Vote-~N...
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11-21-03, 10:07 PM | #8 | |||||||
ShO-Nuff. Fuckers
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IP: C1DA C961
I dropped like shit..
and I'm honestly ashamed to lose to this kid. that highlighted shit was just ehh dumb?..
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11-22-03, 12:00 PM | #9 | ||||
^ Says It All ^
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IP: 7BF7 5EAF
Blah..
2-0 Me.. Up..
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11-24-03, 08:18 AM | #10 | ||||||
OriginIll
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IP: D79C 2834
Bribe I Got To Go W/ NLitEnd On This One... I Wasnt Feeling Your
Verse Man... You COuld Have Dropped ALOT Better.... N's Was Decent Enough To Win.... Even Though The Link Think Was Corny Vote N |
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11-24-03, 08:25 AM | #11 | |||||||
-Merk Squad-
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IP: F3D3 3619
Really not feelin it bribe, you know you got more than that
N your verse was a bit blah.....but had a couple of aigh lines Vote goes to N. |
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11-25-03, 08:05 AM | #12 | ||||||
OriginIll
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IP: D79C 2834
N LitEnd Wins
Bribe Loses Battle Closed |
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