i sit back n i think dis shit cud work, but no ill get hurt
n i aint guna do da same shit agen, fuck im fine havin da bitch as a frend
but u no there those times, where i wana give it a try
but i think no shes a flirt fuck it no point to it, she may like me n wants to get wit me dont mean i will do it,
but shes like a fuckin divorced wife, i c her n it reminds me of da impact she had on my life,
then brings me back to when i wanted to cut ha ass up wit a knife, n apart of me still doesnt want her alive,
i wud kill ha but u no ppl may get mad, so ill jus rape ha n ill jus b glad,
n if i end up bein a dad, pop ha in da stomach n make her shit out da child we wuda had
u no wat fuck u i dont give a fuck if u like me or not, u jus want this shit i got
lets take a look u got shook i told u bitch were done den u were hooked u cudnt get this no more all u cud do is look
then u wana act like u dont no me, but u dint tell no 1 u blowed me
but dat nite was sumthin i wont forget, i dint no u did that freaky shit
i dint no u liked to get beat, thought u were all preppy n sweat
well mayb u dint enjoy it as much as i did, but shit i remember my first hit
it was across ur face u dint expect it, i told u i was guna beat u i no i sed it
so dont say i dint warn u u skanky ass hoe, u shuda known,
i love to hit gurls love to rape them vidoe tape them then break up wit them n hate them
thats my daily rutin i thought u new, y u think i evn tried wit u
not cus yo looks wat u think u look good?, ha thats da funniest shit ive eva herd i wish i would
shit that b da day wen i go out wit u for ur looks, remember wen u came to my house n u aksed y i had all those hooks,
then i told u it was for fishin cus i go campin, then u asked y had all those guns in the cabnit
i cud tell u liked it ur eyes were peeled, then i put a bag ova ur face n tape ova yo moth to keep da lips sealed,
took u up stairs u were fitin tryin to get free, so i accdently dropped u down the stairs u started to bleed,
it was an accident i dint mean to i swear, well actauly i did but i did care,
cus i brought u clorox n peroxide for u to swallow down, then ur hed started to spin round,
u were shakin i herd bones breakin i thought u were fakin so i laffed i dint no wat i was makin i thought the pussy was mine for the takin so i pushed play n it started tapin n u were screamin so i thought u liked it i wudnt call that rapein
but wen u started bleedin i thought it was normal cus it was ur first time, hold on gota change the tape ran outa time
ok there we go stop bleedin now, ur gettin it all over the ground,
Bitch i jus thought u shud no that i hate u, i neva really wanted to date u
i wanted sum shit but u jus wudnt give it, so i had to take it so i cud hit it,
please jus open up ur knees, look bitch i sed please
open up yo mutha fuckin thighs, do i need to get the hooks n cut out yo eyes?,
there u go oo yea dam yo shit tite, stop cryin bitch this is rite,
oo its ok that the bed sheets r wite, dont try to get out please dont fite,
bitch stop tryin to struggle, im done now lets cuddle,
bitch stop movin y u cryin, u no u liked it stop lien,
oo ur sayin i wasnt good now ur critisizin, guess i shud start slicein,
first yo legs cus who needs those, wait let me rip off yo clothes,
oo shit u did grow sum tits, shud start wit da nipples 2 quick slits,
naw wait give me yo wrists, make yo hands into fists,
there u go wow u listen pretty well, so now they can understand u in hell,
u no imma use yo body wen im done, first imma send yo eyes to one of yo frends bri or heather etha 1
then yo tits will b handed to yo best guy frend, shud i give em personally or jus send?,
naw i wudnt b able to hold them my self, jus give em to sum1 else,
y r u cryin ull like the cuttin, it will betta then us fuckin,
i promis u that i wont hurt u it will b fast, unl;es u want the pain to last,
yo ass guna get me rich, well c ya lata bitch.

yo let me get sum feeback for dis i no how craszy n sick it is but still

Bro, you're wild. We should challenge some folks to a tag team battle sometime. Good flow, nice and crazy like some of your other shit I've peeped

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But you, gimme some feedback on "inevitable" it's in open mic. Thanks.

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iite well do that shit u set it up n let me no n well do it, cmon need more feedback

Like black marks you got whack arts in your files like cartoons
You chatter indiscreetly that matter is completely bar room
Trash your heat finish eat some spinach and become Popeye
Slop guy is your name kid, you a liability to the game stop try
Be silly you lame

wit a 0-2 record u gota lot of room to talk rite?, get da fuck outa here ask for feedback not a whack ass rym

Like black marks you got whack arts in your files like cartoons
You chatter indiscreetly that matter is completely bar room
Trash your heat finish eat some spinach and become Popeye
Slop guy is your name kid, you a liability to the game stop try
Be silly you lame

iite i saw wat u rote da first time

damn nigga that was long but i liked it and keep it up.
peace

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yo dawg thx im lookin for a collabo on don smthin like that like a story, bout if u jus aint liken sum1 n wana do fucked up shit to them like that, u interested holla, n leme get more feedback bout this

can i get more feedback? ill return da favor

leme get sum feedback on dis i no its long but jus fuckin read it dam, n ill return da favor stop sleepin n lets go!!!

leme get some feedback man shit lets go