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02-15-04, 04:52 AM | #1 | ||||
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Tortured Wordz...
IP: C1DA C961
I'm sittin' here bored as fuck just typin' a rhyme...
as I write from the mind with a light that's sublime... I'm takin' back the game that is rightfully mine... I'm writin' the linez that bring sight to the blind... I speak Otherwordz...I've been enlightened through time... I know that y'all might not understand the language I speak... Otherwordz was placed on the planet just to vanquish the weak.. get shanked till you leak when I stab you with the pen in my hand... my tounge is razor sharp and equipped to dismember a man... I'll shatter ya nervez,leave cadaverz scattered when I splatter you herbz... I'll leave you battered with a massacred verse... a battle with wordz hardly ever endz as just a battle of wordz... I gotta keep on rhymin'...ain't nuttin' better to do... I never claimed to be the greatest ever but I know I'm better than you... let it be true...don't make me have to prove it ya bitch... my pen is magic cause I make fake mc'z vanish at the move of my wrist... you foolishly spit a so-called freestyle after you rehearsed it... so I sit back and watch ya death sentence turn into a verse quick... so now I put an end to the verse...and turn my eyez to the porn... ya dead so now I'ma start typin' ya birth...it's almost 5 in the morn... Last edited by Otherwordz : 02-15-04 at 04:55 AM. |
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02-15-04, 06:21 AM | #2 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 8C7D 8E52
this shit was hot it really didn't have a point but still it was on point, so just keep up the good work gun
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shut the fuck up even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun dead in middle of little of little italy little did we know that we riddle some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun |
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02-15-04, 06:30 AM | #3 | |||||||
1E
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IP: 5AF5 5CA5
wack....haha... nah, it was good, the flow was nice and smooth and the scheme carried well... some nice multis n shit.... another dope drop...
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02-15-04, 06:56 AM | #4 | ||||
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IP: C1DA C961
^^^I know...I'm just too damn sexy...lol
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02-16-04, 12:45 AM | #5 | ||||
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IP: 6236 079F
uppin'...
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02-16-04, 12:57 AM | #6 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 6236 079F
nice flow - multi's, vocab was adequate but I expected more seeing as you claimed it would be hard to understand you. Nice personal praise piece though - hit something in my sig - preferably Broken Metamorphosis if you haven't yet.
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02-16-04, 01:07 AM | #7 | ||||
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IP: 6236 079F
^^^aiiight...thanks for the feed...and as for the simplicity of the piece...as you can probably tell...it was a keystyle at almost 5am...so I just did it out of boredom...and I'ma hit ya piece up right now...holla...
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02-16-04, 12:34 PM | #8 | ||||
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IP: 4577 CD9A
uhhh...still uppin'...
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