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06-29-05, 03:08 AM | #1 | ||||||
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bROOKLYN
IP: B6F5 E078
Responsibility was given to him since he was young/
all he did was work and get hit, there wasnt time for any fun/ father's a drunk, mommas a ho',but he doesnt know what he has in sto'/ everybody knew he had an incredible, mind busting "flow"/ turned 18 walked out on his momma and spat at his father/ they pleaded for him to come back but he didnt even bother/ his friend was like a good pal maybe even a bro/ but beefs and money problems made his protection "low"/ it was the unnecessary bets he couldnt pay off, that brought threats/ one problem brought his friends life to an end/ only if he would of paid, instead of paying to get laid/ well thats life in Brooklyn. "Theres always someone on top of you in the food chain"
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06-29-05, 03:12 AM | #2 | ||||
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IP: 7D8B DD8E
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tight first OM homie... nice emotions and creativity OK: try ta fix-up structure so flow improves na' mean? Multi's r needed to make that shit realy hot but for first OM, bein a good one its an 8/10
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06-29-05, 03:24 AM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: C746 CB1A
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jea i agree wit ax but dis was ight fo a first
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