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Old 09-26-04, 02:02 AM   #1
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Virtue/Croation/Mixtape diss.. checkit

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yo need some chrit on this

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/o...ctionzmusic.htm

he aint gonna drop on our battle.. but i still need feedback
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Old 09-26-04, 02:12 AM   #2
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lmfao...yo omb wtf you doin this an we talkin on aim at this moment lmfao i know you didnt mean any harm its because i'm late on my battle verse....
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Old 09-26-04, 02:13 AM   #3
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oh an my name is Theory now....
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Old 09-26-04, 02:17 AM   #4
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yeah but i recorded it before ur name change... lol

and you said you werent gonna drop -_- so i figured may not waste it.. its not like we got beef or anything.. and stfu im giving you 30,000 rv money tomorrow!!,, you should be praising me!
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Old 09-26-04, 02:25 AM   #5
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lmfao....would like to whore you but am d/l some new new new eminem shit....
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Old 09-26-04, 02:26 AM   #6
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fair enough.. well im up for a battle whenever
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Old 09-26-04, 02:28 AM   #7
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man croation he pretty good man it was a dope audio... i listen to all ur audios and i like prize fight... i like twista's beats...
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Old 09-26-04, 11:53 AM   #8
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Make ur vocal's louder and put more feeling and emotion into it.
Sounds like u readin. -1

u got sum potential...an I like that beat ....
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Old 09-26-04, 12:31 PM   #9
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pretty good, i love this beat as well, and you do have mad potential, you had the flow down, i mean, you were on beat, the only thing i thought that could have been bttere was your delivery,it sounded a little, like you rushed, just relax nextime, and let your shit just come out, you definitely have ya own style in your voice,oh and the lyrics were good too,....good shit
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Old 09-26-04, 05:53 PM   #10
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word.. thanks for the feedback
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Old 09-27-04, 09:19 AM   #11
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Overall Pretty Good Drop. You Def Got Mad Potential For Audio.

Turn Up Ya Vocals and Work on Ya Emotion ... Nice Drop
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Old 09-27-04, 10:28 AM   #12
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damn... everyone says that -_-
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Old 09-29-04, 06:32 AM   #13
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umm..tell you the truth this was ehh...your voice alone will hold my attention but for some reason it didn't sound like you were flowin or you went in and out of the beat...no beef but you sound like a textcee tryin to read a text verse to a beat..but the lines had me laughin
two sides of ugly...lol ima have to use that one day
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Old 09-29-04, 06:35 AM   #14
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^lmao "ima have to use that one day"

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
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Old 09-29-04, 06:53 AM   #15
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not in a battle dumbass..just in a conversation..yeah i thought about how it sounded when i said it but ehh...im lazy
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