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08-06-04, 01:36 PM | #1 | ||||||
fuck da hataz B.A.M 4 life
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neva new it would turn dis way ft. emerginmc07
IP: BC27 B361
raw killa ft. emerginmc07
(cell fone rings...i pick up) (girl)-hey baby how r u? (me)-im good mami how bout u?im on my way home... (man's voice in back ground)cum back 2 bed... (me)-wtf who was dat u....?cheatin on me....? (girl)no wut r u tlkn bout? (man's voice)-c'mon baby fuck dat dude (me)-him dat guy bitch u cheatin on me? (girl)-no its not like dat calm down (me)-no bitch u calm down ima !?@!#!!?!? u n him up bye (dial tone)(tires squeel) yo u kno wut i hate....? stupid lyin,cheatin,frontin bitches,u kno y? cuz all bitches is hoes..... -hook-raw killa i didnt want shit 2 turn out dis way,i neva meant 2 buy dis gat 2 spray,neva meant 2 have ur family on they knees in tears 2 pray,n i bet u wish now u neva did wut u did dat day/ verse-raw killa its was a saturday evenin i was comin home 4 work,came in da house heard ya screams from twirkin wit sum otha jerk,so i grabbed my gat n went 2 work,shot u both dead 2 relieve da hurt,burien memories i use 2 cherish 6 ft unda da earth,its cuz it was 2 weeks afta our daughters birth,so many twist n turns n da plot gets worse,secrets r opened wit words dat burst,ya apitite 4 truth n quinch ya thirst,da cold heart of a young man who feelin's hurt/ didnt have ya ring,but da vibe was closely similar 2 da thing,meanin wut rings represent, 4 those heaven sent,bent on bended knee's askin ur hand while heavenly angel's sing/ like we werent yet married,but our vows were already made n buried,where da ears in da wind took wut our voices carried,n kept locked in da cemetary/ now like i said i didnt want shit 2 turn out dis way,i neva meant 2 buy dis gat 2 spray,neva meant 2 have ur family on they knees in tears 2 pray,n i bet now u wish u neva did wut u did dat day,n like jay-z wut more can i say,those tears of pain r kept locked away,swallow my pride 4 a minute n cry tears neva cried sendin messagges only tears can say,was time was it? wut was da day,oh yea sorta like a metaphor of ur souls freedom it was.....july 4th...independence day, im sry baby girl i didnt want shit 2 turn out dis way,i neva meant 2 buy dis gat 2 spray,neva meant 2 have ur family on they knees in tears 2 pray,n i bet u wish u neva did wut u did dat day/ the roses were red da violets were blue,like ya runnin blood was red,ur bodies color slowly turned 2 blue,permant break up,wit no more make up through n through,was i crazy or am i in love who knows da screamin true-th,spend my las hour da only left alive 2 answer des mysteries wit his gun cocked in his mouth sittin on da roof,wit my gun da mic n da world my booth,leave tainted lies 6 ft. entangled in roots,wit a note on her parents door step declarin da truth, bury myself beside u pull da trigger n shoot,now both our trapped spirits r loose,n love's mysteries become 1 n life blooms anew a truce,roses r red n violets r blue..... -hook- -verse2-emerginmc07 yo man bithces can play these games o well mine learned ey yo- yo gave her my heart n love, gave me a kiss den turned round n gave my frend a hug, to busy lookin at her dint look up, 2 weeks lata i found she and my frend fucked, it was love i thought, we fought, so she sought, n wen she got caught, it was me n my 9 i brought, we screamed she tried bein nice, i hit ha across da hed n den did it twice, she cheated, i was mistreated, felt like i was defeated, so i was heated, so i shot her n den repeated, lets jus say our relationship then was deleted, fuck da bitch evrythin she got she deserved, they alredy had her tombstone and coffin reserved, if only i dint have to witness and observe, o well her punishment was served, she dint undastand wat i felt, n she neva helped, at first i pittied myself, but fuk her she found sum1 else, i had her by her hair n she knelt, n den her cards were delt, now i cant jus forgt bout da hoe, cus u no, i can let go, she played me 2 times in a row, y did i keep goin back? i duno, yo u shdua seen wen her body was found, it was half buried unda ground, wen i was doin it i wasnt lookin round, n i guess a niehbor heard a sound, cops came i dipped, her body was flipped, she was stripped, her back whipped, n they found out her tites were clipped, they cudnt find da trace, no1 saw my face, its a closed case, da murderer got away wit out a trace, yo man my final thought is, if u a bitch who cheats read dis, i dont give a fuck who u r or if i hurda u, if i fidn out u cheated on sum1 i no i will personally murda u
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08-06-04, 02:13 PM | #2 | ||||||
fuck da hataz B.A.M 4 life
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yo people dont sleep read n tell us wut u think hey yo emergin nigga its posted peep it help me up it...lol.....holla back nigga n niggets peace i luv holla back^^^^^^^^^^^
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08-06-04, 02:40 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: C1DA C961
damn man, that's powerful. i think its good stuff. i'm new, but here's what i was thinkin. i like how u flow all through your verses, and i like the last verse too, but its def a different kinda flow. u don't rhyme at the end (it was love, i thought, we fought...), and it kinda threw me off at first, but i think it can show more power. sounds like u thought stuff out well, nice job.
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08-06-04, 03:45 PM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: 443B 917E
cool drop therre........some serious shit.........gd gd.........flow was tight and rhymes were tight too.....keep it p
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08-06-04, 03:50 PM | #5 | ||||||
fuck da hataz B.A.M 4 life
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IP: 8480 AFAA
ty 2 f8thfull21 n xxxtayve 4 da love n feedback keep givin damn em wher eu at?...lol hell me prote dis...lol shit hot must read rv holla back will return da favor^^^^^^^^^
uppin dis shit^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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08-06-04, 04:57 PM | #6 | ||||||
fuck da hataz B.A.M 4 life
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IP: 8480 AFAA
k besides my 2 replies uppin dis shit there's been 2 replies outta 19 u fuckin lazy ass peeps betta start leavin feedback we wanna kno wtf u think n quit sleepin,hatin w/e ya'll do n return da fuckin favor lazy punks uppin dis shit peace^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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08-06-04, 07:12 PM | #7 | |||||
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sounds real and powerful. but it's good.
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08-06-04, 07:56 PM | #8 | ||||||
fuck da hataz B.A.M 4 life
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IP: ACB6 F322
ayt rv im upppin dis shit peep it n leave feedback 4 christ sakes peace
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08-06-04, 07:59 PM | #9 | ||||
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IP: C2FE 1710
damn...that was hot. got pretty intense at times...but good shit. and yea the way u was rhymin was different but hey it worked
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08-06-04, 08:12 PM | #10 | ||||||
fuck da hataz B.A.M 4 life
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IP: ACB6 F322
hey lil kay holla at me on yahoo need 2 tlk bout shit...u kno wut i mean holla n thanx 4 da love peace mami uppin dis joint^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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08-06-04, 11:10 PM | #11 | ||||
the girl people love to hate
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IP: DB74 CF34
"wit my gun da mic and the world my booth" that was one of my favorite sentences. nice drop. very clear and detailed. i like this. now ya'll just need some audio equip to start doin that. nice
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08-06-04, 11:13 PM | #12 | |||||
the girl people love to hate
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that is.... the words and how they rhymed but still fit in, was beautiful. i like this a lot.
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08-07-04, 02:12 AM | #13 | ||||||
fuck da hataz B.A.M 4 life
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IP: CA64 5FA1
ty 4 da love n respect ladies now niggaz ya'll gonna show sum luv?holla ack peace
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08-07-04, 02:37 AM | #14 | ||||||
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IP: 5671 DBDD
yo i was feeling that good drop i heard you spit some trash but not here that was hot to death you need better vocab but good fucking drop fo sho
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08-07-04, 04:07 AM | #15 | ||||||
fuck da hataz B.A.M 4 life
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IP: 37A5 5DB2
n e 1 thinks i eva dropped n e thing less than perfection in its own art is fuckin hata but thanx 4 da love caliph holla back rv quit sleepin feedback need n wanted uppin
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