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11-30-04, 04:48 PM | #1 | |||||||
***cITYSLICka***
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2004.....jus' a form of slavery organized!
IP: E31B AA42
How can I blame a palefaced being
for what my people did to me first? Black Kings and queens invented the slave trade, it's just that palefaces did it worst They observed and marvelled at our greatness And chose to displace it Brought us to this land and invented the word racist Conquered our minds by division, taught us to see a difference and hate it Then curse us for the ignorance that they created Damn i'm so glad that we made it, but then again did we really you may not agree now but trust, you will eventually feel me back in the days the masters tools were whips and chains analyze the game now a days and you'll see his tools ain't changed you still do what he wants of you just in a different day and age just different words in a book but same chapter and same page
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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY, ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there) EVIL............backwards =............LIVE |
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12-01-04, 09:58 AM | #2 | |||||||
***cITYSLICka***
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feedbak wanted..................................
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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY, ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there) EVIL............backwards =............LIVE |
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12-04-04, 04:05 PM | #3 | ||||
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damn... nobody commented on this?... that's fucked up.... no one wants to hear real shyt... but i bet if the title was 2004, My Guns Still Bust... there woulda been a shytload of feedback... this shyt was tight and it was kinda like the joint in my sig verses Anxiety... peep it... it's already closed so ya can't vote or leave feedback... omma repost it in the OM thread... but yeah... this was realy good shyt and i enjoy reading shyt with a legitimate message... stay up
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12-04-04, 05:28 PM | #4 | |||
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Not too bad. Good topic to write to, and you dished up the emotion pretty decently. Wording could use a little work, weak vocab but it worked fine. All in all it was ok. Keep writin
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12-06-04, 08:46 AM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: F2B1 8D50
yeah seems peeps don't wanna think about reality but to each his own.i'm just glad somebody read it and left some feed,which is greatly appreciated.
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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY, ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there) EVIL............backwards =............LIVE |
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