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Old 09-18-04, 01:38 AM   #1
Mentalz
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My Gun 4 Life (thugness4 Realz!! Peep This Playas!)

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HEY YO i GOTS MY GUNS FOR LIFE FOR REALZ NO STRIFE
I SPIT HOT SHIT NO ONE ON THIS SITE GOT MORE HYPE
LOOK AT MY RHYME SCHEME, IT GETS IN YA HEAD LIKE A DREAM//
OOOH!! I SPIT IT CLEAN AN' STOOPED DOWN THE REVINE!!
NOW YOU CAN UNDERSTAND ME AND 4 THAT IM GLAD!
WITH A SMILE ON MY FACE I SIT BACK AND CRUISE IN MY CAD!

Now that I have your attention, most of you piss me off

Right now, the sound plows as my mind erupts in showers
I try to explain the pain but it rips down my super powers
So I exchange the game and I write like these 14 year olds
To attract attention and watch as wackness unfolds from holes
Whats happened here? Just the same old skript of foul lip
That expells the blown shells of exhausted missprints
Im tired of shit. What? it wasnt gangsta' enough for you?
What, I didn't vote on that battle where dude tore through?
"Peep this battle I'll get you back"
*wink*
Fuck you, your battle and any feedback you leave my links
You know shit, my pen knows more and its an ounce of black ink
Sometimes I spit fluid and it flows like liquid movement
and sometimes I have cats explain to ME how to improve it
Then I check what they have and its a mass of fuckin' mayhem
Like they opened up webster and let the words fall like grained sand
And all of the sudden the fucks scrambled and formed words
Then right after that the verbs took on succession for message
Where the lesson was lessoned by the down right suggestion-
that they know what they're talking about without a doubt..
Well how about this, graduate, then come back an' open your mouth

weak flame but im to tired to do any better right now.

if I lie on 50% of the threads here, vote for fucks who have a few posts then go battle someone with skill, I should get the win accourding to Newtons Rapverse.com laws, right? Gdamn this sites went to shit.

resume the netbeef and netstreet netheat with netguns where 12 year olds eat pussy like red meat. Peace. For a good while.
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