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09-11-06, 06:27 PM | #1 | ||||||
Whys That?
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Crazy Hades vs Myself
IP: 5285 DC82
Picture Battle
Check in due: 9/14 Verse due 9/20 Line limit open: Last edited by Peace : 09-11-06 at 11:57 PM. |
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09-12-06, 03:54 PM | #2 | |||
1926
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IP: 3240 794D
ya, i'm here...
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09-12-06, 03:58 PM | #3 | |||
Just searching.
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IP: 707B E979
I'm here, teacher.
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09-14-06, 05:04 PM | #4 | |||
1926
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IP: 3240 794D
Boh boh, bu-bu-bu bah bump bump boh
He taps the trash cans and plastic tubs, double bass harmonics spill along the last hymn sung; the music man dances with conductor stick in hand while the crowds pile around the rush of simplistic trance. Light breathes along the sides of Heineken mic necks against silhouettes of a baritone trisect; in the intersection he blows his fingers testing his throat, warming up by harmonizing in notes Do-do-do rey mi dooooo Paper towel dowley tuba lays the tune of the fifth symphony, he's playing una. Two trash lids lift the focal instrument as soprano vibrato echoes the increments. Maestro plays right by through his lament with head high in the boldest content. Catered in the sixth octave the orchestrator, three blocks in, lifts his arm and starts to orate chords as the savor is stopped short... as the flicker of a single finger strips form from a man who's stamped by liquor and disfigure. The notes tumble from a swollen eye as the conductor stick wilts under a folded line; staffs shatter and ruptured tics pass matter and dissipate in the age old pain of social sty. The man dies inside; mills off spilling nickels and dimes along disappointment: the sidewalk. He holds his pride in an old patched hat that spills notes along his own in that last pass, where dollar bills ran away with rey mi do and the masterpiece was cheapened by the green of notes. So he mopes off along another end prolonged, still holding on to the little that's gone ... but a musician isn't assuaded for long, as he passes a trash can and searches for songs. |
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09-21-06, 03:02 PM | #5 | |||||||
Under Oath
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IP: F8C0 2149
Very nice drop atticus vocab, word usage, creativity 10+ but you know its kinda shitty your partner dident show, Props for showing up big dog......................
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09-21-06, 03:58 PM | #6 | |||
1926
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
ya, especially becuase i wanted to get knocked out of VE ... fucking hades
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09-21-06, 06:14 PM | #7 | |||
Just searching.
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IP: 0825 899A
- giggles into hand. -
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09-21-06, 07:17 PM | #8 | ||||||
Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
Atty wins .
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