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10-21-04, 03:37 AM
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Welcome 2 Dope South
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Shit On My Mind
IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Niggas Worried About Structure
When It’s All About Tha Lyrics If I LINE My Shit Up In Syllables Yo Mouth, I’m Going To Hear It Don’t Get Me Wrong Ya’ll I Grow Off Tha Feedback I Ain’t As Cocky As Most Niccas But My Lyrics Man I Breathe Dat I Write In Poetry Form An A Real Rappa Know Dat Listen Ta 2Pac Man His Lyrics I Swear They Show Dat Ad I’m Versatile So No I Don’t Have No Critiqued Style (UK) Tha Unknown Now But Once Known As Tha Unknown Child
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10-21-04, 05:26 AM
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Welcome 2 Dope South
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IP: 0ABC 464B
let me know wah u thonk
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10-21-04, 06:48 AM
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IP: 48EA 7C3F
I thought it was wack. Didnt like it.
fix ya structure, flow, vocab and content. |
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01-02-05, 06:01 AM
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www.militantmusic.com
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IP: 4065 F767
Ure Structre Was Off I Didnt Like It Cause U Rhymed Every Other Line
And Ure Rhymin Was Basic U Rhymed Know Dat With Show Dat U Aint Got No Vocab Up It Man...
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