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05-10-05, 10:42 PM | #1 | ||||
B.I.G.
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Weedman
IP: 7D8B DD8E
who?................... who?.................... who?...................... AX to da D. O. Double G
(Intro) Roll it.... Light it.... then blow the smoke in the sky.... (x2) (Hook) The streetz is callin ma niggaz is ballin My hoes be smokin My Foe's be choakin WEEDMAN gon take u bitches home WEEDMAN has come to brake ur bones WEEDMAN gots the weed, ain't no lie WEEDMAN gots the weed, lets get high Lets get hiiiiiiiiiigh (Verse 1) I used to pick on my bitches on a green cadillac a lil bit of change now that the ol' kool is back kinda da same cuz now's a green escalade errtime I jump on da street iz jus like a parade don't get the wrong Idea, I ain't no killah Ain't ax no more, Itz WEEDMAN da Drug dealer I can sell u drugs, come to me cappisshh why I'm high all day? I have weed on my dish fuck pizza, fuck mc donalds, I'm only in grass the business, fun always, big money, big grass then I got them crome 26's, rimz spinnin and I do sell drugs to da children, call me Drug Demon don't matter blck, white or even chinese I'm in every street, like the pot desease don't blame me, I'm only the seller, blame da do' I hear em sayin "I want weed get me sum mo'" (Hook) The streetz is callin ma niggaz is ballin My hoes be smokin My Foe's be choakin WEEDMAN gon take u bitches home WEEDMAN has come to brake ur bones WEEDMAN gots the weed, ain't no lie WEEDMAN gots the weed, lets get high Lets get hiiiiiiiiiigH
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05-10-05, 10:45 PM | #2 | ||||
B.I.G.
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IP: 7D8B DD8E
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05-10-05, 10:52 PM | #3 | |||||
The story goes. Bill, B.
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IP: 606D F99A
this was farrly basic...it didnt domuch for being so short...try different vocab or words to liven things up....6.5/10..rtf in my sig...ALL OR I WILL NEVER RTF BACK ON YOU EVER!
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05-10-05, 10:56 PM | #4 | ||||
B.I.G.
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IP: 7D8B DD8E
ok... lol..... thanks for the feedback
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05-10-05, 11:20 PM | #5 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: D1BF FA16
yea this was pretty basic
nuthin overly creative.......the flow and structure was on point and shit overall i think it was aight, too short though to i give it 6/10 return the favour on my new OM "I Wanna Be......" |
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05-10-05, 11:33 PM | #6 | ||||
B.I.G.
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IP: 7D8B DD8E
hahaha thanks fo that but i think it deserved a 7/10... it ain't that bad...
or is it??????
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05-11-05, 11:54 AM | #7 | ||||
Light Weight
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IP: 452E 0970
ye this is kinda good
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"You Gotta Clean Your Life Before You Begin Your Life, You Dumb Nigga" -2Pac- SHEEP CLUB 4 EVA <img src="http://www.bestanimations.com/Humans/SkullBones/SkullBones-01.gif"> Keep Votin (Ill RTF) Me Vs Ax Dogg...Dont listen to the haters..I didnt bite any line... Me Vs Murdz |
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05-11-05, 01:00 PM | #8 | ||||
leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: DAA3 1F21
actually this wasnt anything really...
whats with the lack of creativity n the gansta writtens, its a cliche ax dogg.......get creative... try using wordplay n decent original metas... your ryhme scheme fell off bad in some areas too .lol, i doubt solo even read it...lol flow was on point...ya right,...lmfao
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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05-12-05, 04:21 PM | #10 | ||||
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IP: 7D8B DD8E
I'll keep up my shit... thanks fo tha feedback, ama return tha favor
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