sup, heres a verse i come up with a couple of months back, check it, its sum hardcore shit cos i jus started to mc and im gonna drop hardcore til you know i aint about no gimmick. check out the post on who the best producer is and it will show you i aint no fake hip hop junkie. Check this shit...

im spittin raw raps
executin small cats
cos you talk whack
and i talk phat
im torturin your ball sack
stickin anthrax in your ass crack
spittin gore raps
that'll rip ya jaw back
your in a morgue
and nothin but a corpse
cos i spit this shit with no remorse
and when they bury you with satan
i will rip up your corpse and throw it all over your nannas porch,

im flippin the scripts
and crucifying all you little bitches
leave your body needin stitches
and throw it in a ditch, quick

thats wot i got so far, need to do sum work on it but seen as though i only been emceein for bout 2 or 3 months its alright, let me know wot you think so i can get better. Im representin UK hip hop wot, BIG shoutout to GOUKI P, soon the apocalypse will drop. oh yeah and dont go bitin my shit. Big L R.I.P.

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rep the uk good then, elevate ure vocab, flow was ok i guess, kinda basic, learn about multies, syllables n shit then u'll b on ure way.............
check New Era Hip-hop , links in ma sig..

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I'm usually nicer to you noobs, but i gotta say.... that was just plain awful!

Aint nobody gan be bitin that shit

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Haha very true there

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OMG HAHAHAHHA that was bad

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Check out this battle

[url]http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121115[/url]

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check out my other stuff, i know it aint that tight but ima work on this shit, then rip up u haters wot...