ok man da rules is
10 line min---30 line max
u spit first
due 30 mins
no d/r or hate votes
no bitin or recyclin

wun

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chekin in..one

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man i aint gon beat you i prepared da wackiest shit
lol damn nigga you gon merk me so easy.anyways here it goes

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The Definition. period.

you rhyme like a freestylin CLOWN//
im pretty sure i aint da only one wantin ta chase you outta TOWN//
allotta people call ya a masta//
i think they mean a masta of disasta//
i got yo name AND yo numba//
i comin afta you//
dun worry ma motherfuckin aim IS true//
keep runnin city to city//
i know ill catch you i aint in a hurry//
even if you may be innocent//
i gotta dispose of you cause you cause too much embarassment//
so dun worry i aint FAR behind//
i hope you aint tha nigga thatll mind//
from da way you rap it seems yous thinks yous a slicksta//
but remember dis.....you CANT fuck wit ME nigga//

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The Definition. period.

damn that was wack
put me outta ma misery homey.and plz,do it quick

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The Definition. period.

dat was from da top of my head right here right now.i hope i get at least one vote.lol

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The Definition. period.

aight dawg bfor u give ya self a heart attack get cha shit in order//
u from canada eh!! iam from tha states iam across da border//
and dis fool got ma numbah..but he dont wanna call long distance//
cuz he a cheap nigga..and on april 27th is wen u got napped and u havnt been missed since//
and ya moms or pops dont care cuz u was a mistake//
i got money flowing every were its like i piss cake//
and i spit fire like a dragon..but wash up urs like doin tha dishes//
doin drive bys in a wagon..and cap all u lil canadian bitches//
yo ill make sure i dont spit to much fire so ya igloo dont melt//
ayo chek iam a stop soon cuz burnin hurts and i dont want u to feel waat i felt//
and ma throat startin to hurt i think i need some halls//
oh shit dis niggas a gangsta he put graphiti in some stalls//
ayo dont shoot wit cha glocks full of papa clipz//
and ill have ma bulletts "grindin" wit cha bones like dat 2 man crew clipsez//

wun muh fuckah..

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uppin fo votez,.,,

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Jokah all the way... Yo he had a good flow, nice rhymes, and yeah... Dawg i dont think you were trying.... anyways.. if you were elevate that man... anyways

Vote - Jokah

aight uppin fo votes^^^^^^

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Really one-sided........
DF
structure 6/10
flow 6/10
punchlines 7/10
creativity 6/10
total 25
Your skill was too, and I mean too simple. Work on it.

DJ

structure 8/10
flow 7/10
punchlines 8/10
creativity 7/10
total 30
DJ got this one, but you need to add metaphors in your work.

vote DJ

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Grim

aight uppin for votes...one..

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aiight da jokah put it down in this battle his punches were bettr his overall effort was better he murked this cat i really like the opener and closer

aight man uppin ^^^.......

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