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dis shyt is hot to def....feedback plz


i just learned about cool edit and made a banger...shyt, dis can go fo a legend.

HOLLA

Please....rhyme on beat at least....talk about whatever...but rhyme on beat...

NEVER again use a big verse

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Lyrics was dope, n i felt ya tone/emotion...could be on the hits a bit more but I thought it was aight. chorus wasn't anything special, but could be cus the beat don't change through it.

for u'r second beat tho i though ya have real potential.

u want custom beats for no charge hit me up.

Phate2148

pc

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nice drop, i like this beat it sound good wit most cas on it,
it could make justin timberlake, sound grimy.....

nice lyrics, though, i like the delivery.

nice drop.
pz

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"I'm just the boy that u went down on/
and ya sluts gotta pay me da fuck from now on//"

damn son that whole bar came straight from a cassidy freestyle.

plus u was spittin off beat.

My only advice other than stop biting, and learn how to rap is...

Never hype up your track like that in a thread.. when i see that, im expecting THE best.. and im always disapointed...

but yeah.. learn how to flow on beat.. the beat is dope but you ruined it...

fuckin biter

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too bad you banned dog, I was feelin' this man. THEY don't be feelin this shit dog, yeah you coulda been mor on the the beat but it's mix tape quality doe

PS I never heard of cassidy...so he's nobody.

you're not flowin to the beat