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09-26-07, 08:28 PM | #1 | ||||
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somethin i did in class....
IP: 2DF2 5935
im a basic rappist on raps daily basis.
aint affriad of change since the death of our nation. my flow? outrages pages and words with a backthrow. i packslow to rackmore attacks then a track show. i pack man... so call me the rap pac-man. i got pac-raps, rap packs, i write rap with a pac-hand. do u understand? i attack rap with a rap hand. i trap rap in rap traps like rats in a cats hand. got no time for u haters, players and any other fakers. im hustlen on this grind and out here grindin for that paper. ill obliverate any attempts of slaughtering rhymes. im a ghost writter but i still write all of my lines. its clobberin time, im grabbin a hammer and hammering. your temple and damaging braincells untill ur left no longer standing. comprehend the understanding, im way better then yall. see cus u aint understanding me, but im clearly understanding yall. u got one mission, one vision, one life and a chance to listen. your life will be one lost, with no vision to gitt it. ill run in like a kingpin and kick u harder then a pigskin. make u do 20 backflips over 100 napkins and watch u land in a shitbin. ill fade out like i fade in,in a minute u will become a deaf-mute. u cant compute the flow that electrocute, man im absolute. i dont undershoot, i over shoot, and blow up ur computer. hittin u with rhymes comin quicker and sharper then a sharpshooter. to me there is no substatution, im achieved absolution. im the evolution of lucian carrying out your execution. some think they a wiseguy. but im here just to notify i fortified my rhymes so i terrify fools makin'em look cockshy. i amplified my rhymes so now the can electrify. i can disqualify ne fool and have there hole flow in a tounge tie. u bout to pass the borderline, ill push back ur headline. ur jawline ur life line for wut i call a very long time. my flow straighter then a base-line. yours slowly declines. u an underground baby, fool i fly high like an airlines. the bottem line is my flow upbeat, yea its sweet. take a seat, grab a treat, let me preheat my fist while i cook up ur reciet.... ok kinda has no meanin.. did it in class.. just a bunch of multies. leave links later |
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09-27-07, 05:03 AM | #2 | ||||
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IP: 9204 9119
alot of wordplay u had....nice ...just like your other posts before this one....not really much to say sept work on spelling lolz.....still good though....stay up ~1~
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09-27-07, 03:51 PM | #3 | ||||
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IP: 615C 0516
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3184638
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=244091
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09-27-07, 07:33 PM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: 459F 31FB
lotta multis and inners.... a lil drunk but bear with me
im a basic rappist on raps daily basis. aint affriad of change since the death of our nation. my flow? outrages pages and words with a backthrow. i packslow to rackmore attacks then a track show. i pack man... so call me the rap pac-man. i got pac-raps, rap packs, i write rap with a pac-hand. do u understand? i attack rap with a rap hand. i trap rap in rap traps like rats in a cats hand. (it all makes sense tho...lol nice multis and a lil wordplay here) got no time for u haters, players and any other fakers. im hustlen on this grind and out here grindin for that paper. ill obliverate any attempts of slaughtering rhymes. im a ghost writter but i still write all of my lines. its clobberin time, im grabbin a hammer and hammering. your temple and damaging braincells untill ur left no longer standing. (coo) comprehend the understanding, im way better then yall. see cus u aint understanding me, but im clearly understanding yall. (lol k) u got one mission, one vision, one life and a chance to listen. your life will be one lost, with no vision to gitt it. ill run in like a kingpin and kick u harder then a pigskin. make u do 20 backflips over 100 napkins and watch u land in a shitbin. (wow ok) ill fade out like i fade in,in a minute u will become a deaf-mute. u cant compute the flow that electrocute, man im absolute. i dont undershoot, i over shoot, and blow up ur computer. hittin u with rhymes comin quicker and sharper then a sharpshooter. to me there is no substatution, im achieved absolution. im the evolution of lucian carrying out your execution. some think they a wiseguy. but im here just to notify i fortified my rhymes so i terrify fools makin'em look cockshy. i amplified my rhymes so now the can electrify. i can disqualify ne fool and have there hole flow in a tounge tie. u bout to pass the borderline, ill push back ur headline. ur jawline ur life line for wut i call a very long time. (i like the line concept u had goin) my flow straighter then a base-line. yours slowly declines. u an underground baby, fool i fly high like an airlines. the bottem line is my flow upbeat, yea its sweet. take a seat, grab a treat, let me preheat my fist while i cook up ur reciet.... (coo ender) ok kinda has no meanin.. did it in class.. just a bunch of multies. leave links later good multis...decent wordplay, had some inners in some places.....this was str8 tho....good read.... |
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09-27-07, 07:37 PM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: 5233 A220
i thought you did have a decent amount of multies.... this was more like a dipset thing with your multis i ratt tatt tat that gat that i clap and clap the gat that go ratt tatt tat
but still a decent flow and all around keep me reading... keep elevating cuz u got potential... |
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10-11-07, 12:40 PM | #6 | |||
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IP: 30B6 8894
You have 2 Proper feedback links. This open mic will stay open for 2 months after this post.
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