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Old 03-14-05, 05:46 PM   #1
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Yo something i played around with.. Looking for some Honest Feedback...


Song Name: Stay Strong

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/wordmanmusic.htm




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Old 03-15-05, 12:00 AM   #2
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upppin.... for some feed back on this one
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Old 03-16-05, 12:46 PM   #3
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aiight ill d/l now an lets battle real quick you down?..ill set it up.....
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Old 03-17-05, 09:01 AM   #4
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Uppin for some damn Feed!!!!!!!!
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Old 03-17-05, 05:51 PM   #5
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beat is kinda...lame lol
intro is hella long too
sounds like u reading when u spit kinda, quality is ehhh, flow is average i guess, work on delevery fo sho
voice is... ehhh
chorus was interesting, but didnt match the beat
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Old 03-17-05, 08:33 PM   #6
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ok... well then....heres tha truth with no hate

Beat is kinda gay...
flow was ok.. pretty good but fell in places
voice makes me wanna jump out a window...
a destinys child chorus? wtf?
overall 5/10

work on energy to... u sound bland like your just reading even tho u may not be reading... be more powerful... mic presence is ok but needs work....

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