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12-22-04, 11:30 AM | #1 | |||||
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Theories of the mind(peep this)
IP: 28AD 5545
new theories gave purpose to the same worthless hate urchins
homosapiens share belief of control over our own brain circuits in changed wordage so ya gettin me clearly that's identity theory though that lesson is merely a gateway to questions an querries all fearing the truth excites us until it exposes the truths inside us no concious control of the tubes that tie us to our views an bias say its useless science? explore ya soul escape the tortured mold the truth is pure as gold, realize ya mind isn't really in your control stop believing the world you touch and feel is the one thats real allow concious thought to evaporate reveal subconcious appeal feelings reveal more held inside ya mind than the entire outside fear time love hate doubt-pride shame ignorance lies and outcry now try ta imagine dimensions whos depth goes beyond our own wit energies that interact concious known charging quadranomes I ponder those inspiring brain activity power to cycle dimensions my body feels hyperly tensive but why? is now likely the question if the minds an invention my worries are who's the soul controller maybe smokin dope is sober an my grasp on reality is almost over release ya concious an fears think out every thought that appears is ya mind even part of ya brain or were ya just taught ta hear near ya ears?????
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12-22-04, 12:31 PM | #2 | |||||
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uppin this shit here..........please dont sleep on this shit
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12-22-04, 04:25 PM | #3 | |||||
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IP: 28AD 5545
come on peeps...can i please get some feedback or somthin?
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12-22-04, 10:09 PM | #4 | |||||
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uppin again.......dont sleep on this here
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12-23-04, 12:07 AM | #5 | |||||
SEE YA AT THE TOP
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deeper than lil kims pussy
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12-23-04, 01:22 AM | #6 | |||||
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IP: 3240 794D
^^LOL at Oreo..........can i get some more feedback
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12-23-04, 12:33 PM | #7 | |||||
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IP: 0825 899A
uppin this.....................shizzzzzzzzzinit again
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12-23-04, 12:37 PM | #8 | ||||
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its a good drop , you had some nice wordplay , good flow, nice structure but some lines were alittle strected . Work on your bars and make sure your not having strected lines. other then at your pretty decent 7/10
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12-23-04, 01:06 PM | #9 | ||||
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yea this was a good drop man, i liked a lot of your bars in there. this was pretty good man
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12-24-04, 12:25 AM | #10 | ||||||
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this was a nice drop, nice creativity and wordplay also and overall this was a pretty sweet drop..8/10
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12-24-04, 12:58 PM | #11 | |||||
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thanksfor the feedback.......can i get some more feedback?
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12-24-04, 05:41 PM | #12 | |||||
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uppin............................................. ....
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