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04-12-05, 01:53 AM
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...The Truth...
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Are You Gettin Dissed?-Who Knows..............
IP: 74EE 53F5
yea, itz ya boi Young Deuce aka Young Wood 'bout to blast on that ass nigga strap up homie Verse 1
I took 'OneStepForward' to put ya brains to ya shoes Ima keep it G, do like the Southside and give u niggaz tha bluez-* Lyrical Gangbanga, put them bar's to ya chest and if a nigga got a problem u kan find me in the Wild West If u really want beef then see me in tha streetz that nigga Konflictz got me throw'n LS til i die but he didnt no he was fuck'n wit a nigga from tha I 'J Dot' run'n hiz mouth like he got shit to say but wen that heat comes to spray he aint got shit to say I heard Jay-Z was a biter, well J's jus followin his idol yall sum pussies catch'n the flowers like Marital Recitals Emericaz Finest iz bacc? damn yall must be high cuz baseheads run tha streetz and ya boi might die Debit, u a bitch, come see me if u want ya face on ya lap and 20 Grand gotta be thirsty cuz hiz lips iz still chapped You 'Untraceable'? ha nigga u bitch-made and E.F. miss ma presence so they cut it witta switch-blade *Southside Crips-Bluez
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04-12-05, 01:58 PM
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...The Truth...
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IP: 2029 97B3
uppin dis shit yall................
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04-12-05, 02:01 PM
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Cus I Jus Ma$fit Dis Shit
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IP: 964F D870
so is dis a diss track?...jus wonderin
-DB
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04-12-05, 02:04 PM
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...The Truth...
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IP: 2029 97B3
sort of
i aint got nuttin against u but itz wateva drop sum feed
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04-12-05, 02:22 PM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: A14B AE90
all ya concepts were played like a ten cent hoe...
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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04-12-05, 02:25 PM
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...The Truth...
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IP: 2029 97B3
ur opinion iz not important so uppin dis shit
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04-12-05, 02:29 PM
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Cus I Jus Ma$fit Dis Shit
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IP: 964F D870
"its whateva"...lmao
but bout tha track...its a solid diss...eventho its bout my nigga and my crew its still solid...i aint got nothin against u either but if my name comes up, im gone show up...believe dat -DB
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04-12-05, 02:31 PM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: A14B AE90
Quote:
..look in the lounge,alot of your punches were comments by vets..! im just saying ..be a lil more original...... 
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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04-12-05, 02:41 PM
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...The Truth...
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IP: 2029 97B3
ok Daz we koo
i thought u tryin to be 1 of those "Vets" who says dat shit everywere ma bad u no how it iz Doe uppin
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04-12-05, 03:42 PM
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The story goes. Bill, B.
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yea what Daz said...basically...btw WHY THE FUCK DOES EVERYONE HATE EMERICA'S FINEST! Ahh had to get that off of my chest lol
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04-12-05, 03:42 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
Yo dis was an iight verse cuzz some good punches in there hit pretty good flow was a lil off in some places but it was iight i give dis a 7/10.......~1~ RTF on my OM call "FUCK E.F. (hot ass diss)"
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04-13-05, 12:43 AM
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...The Truth...
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IP: 2029 97B3
Uppin Dis Shit...............
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04-13-05, 02:27 AM
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...The Truth...
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IP: 2029 97B3
up Up Uppin Dis Shit
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04-14-05, 07:33 PM
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...The Truth...
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IP: 2029 97B3
Pump Pa Pump Pa Pump Pa Pump It Up
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04-14-05, 07:53 PM
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IP: 0825 899A
This was an okay drop..like daz said please next time come alittle more origonal..
To start off your structure was off , next time try to match up your barz... Second try to make harder punchlines , that ppl havent heard before... Work on showing alittle more effort into your work... maybe some emotions to make .. it stand out.. overall it was a decent drop... could have been alot better.. if you use better wordplay, and elevate your vocab keep it up Drop a link to an OM' you have leftfeed back on or this will be closed
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